Wednesday, October 22, 2025

Daodejing, Laozi, Chapter 41

Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu
Chapter 41


"When a superior scholar hears of Reason he endeavors to practise it.
When an average scholar hears of Reason he will sometimes keep it and sometimes lose it.
When an inferior scholar hears of Reason he will greatly ridicule it.
Were it not thus ridiculed, it would as Reason be insufficient.
Therefore the poet says:
"The Reason--enlightened seem dark and black,
The Reason--advanced seem going back,
The Reason--straight-levelled seem rugged and slack.
"The high in virtue resemble a vale,
The purely white in shame must quail,
The staunchest virtue seems to fail.
"The solidest virtue seems not alert,
The purest chastity seems pervert,
The greatest square will rightness desert.
"The largest vessel is not yet complete,
The loudest sound is not speech replete,
The greatest form has no shape concrete."
Reason so long as it remains latent is unnamable.
Yet Reason alone is good for imparting and completing."
-  Translated by D.T. Suzuki and Paul Carus, 1913, Chapter 41


"When the lofty hear of Way
they devote themselves.
When the common hear of Way
they wonder if it's real or not.
And when the lowly hear of Way
they laugh out loud.
Without that laughter, it wouldn't be Way.
Hence the abiding proverbs:
Luminous Way seems dark.
Advancing Way seems retreating.
Formless Way seems manifold.
High Integrity seems low-lying.
Great whiteness seems tarnished.
Abounding Integrity seems lacking.
Abiding Integrity seems missing.
True essence seems protean.
The great square has no corners,
and the great implement completes nothing.
The great voice sounds faint,
and the great image has no shape.
Way remains hidden and nameless,
but it alone nourishes and brings to completion."
-  Translated by David Hinton, Chapter 41  



"When the man of highest capacities hears Tao
He does his best to put it into practice.
When the man of middling capacity hears Tao
He is in two minds about it.
When the man of low capacity hears Tao
He laughs loudly at it.
If he did not laugh, it would not be worth the name of Tao.
Therefore the proverb has it:
“The way out into the light often looks dark,
The way that goes ahead often looks as if it went back.”
The way that is least hilly often looks as if it went up and down,
The “power” that is really loftiest looks like an abyss,
What is sheerest white looks blurred.
The “power” that is most sufficing looks inadequate,
The “power” that stands firmest looks flimsy.
What is in its natural, pure state looks faded;
The largest square has no corners,
The greatest vessel takes the longest to finish,
Great music has the faintest notes,
The Great From is without shape.
For Tao is hidden and nameless.
Yet Tao alone supports all things and brings them to fulfillment."
-  Translated by Arthur Waley, 1934, Chapter 41



"When great scholars heard of Tao, they diligently followed it.
When mediocre scholars heard of Tao, sometimes they kept it, sometimes they lost it.
When inferior scholars heard of Tao, they laughed at it.
Whether they laugh or whether they follow, Tao remains active.
Therefore the poets have said:
Brightness of Tao seems to be dark,
Progress in Tao seems going back,
The aim of Tao seems confused.
The highest Tao seems lowliest,
Great purity seems full of shame,
The fullest Teh seems incomplete.
Teachers of Teh have lost their zeal
And certain Truth appears to change.
A great square with inner angles,
A great vase unfinished,
A great voice never heard,
A great Image with inner form.
Tao is hid within its Name,
But by Tao the Masters bless,
And all things bring to perfectness."
-  Translated by Isabella Mears, 1916, Chapter 41




上士聞道, 勤而行之.
中士聞道, 若存若亡, 下士聞道, 大笑之. 
不笑不足以為道. 
故建言有之, 明道若昧.
進道若退.
夷道.
若纇
???.
上德若谷.
太白若辱.

廣德若不足.
建德若偷.
質真若渝.
大方無隅. 
大器晚成.
大音希聲.
大象無形.
道隱無名. 
夫唯道, 善貸且成. 
-  Chinese characters, Tao Te Ching, Chapter 41



shang shih wên tao, ch'in erh hsing chih.
chung shih wén tao, jo ts'un jo wang, hsia shih wên tao, ta hsiao chih.
pu hsiao pu tsu yi wei tao.
ku chien yen chê chih.
ming tao jo mei.
chin tao.
jo t'ui yi tao jo lei.
shang tê jo ku.
ta pai jo ju.
kuang tê jo pu tsu.
chien tê jo t'ou.
chih chên jo yü.
ta fang wu yü.  
ta ch'i wan ch'eng.
ta yin hsi shêng.
ta hsiang wu hsing.
tao yin wu ming.
fu wei tao shan tai ch'ieh ch'êng.
-  Wade-Giles Romanization, Tao Te Ching, Chapter 41  






 


"Scholars of the highest class, when they hear about the Tao, earnestly carry it into practice.
Scholars of the middle class, when they have heard about it, seem now to keep it and now to lose it.
Scholars of the lowest class, when they have heard about it, laugh greatly at it.
If it were not laughed at, it would not be fit to be the Tao.
Therefore the sentence-makers have thus expressed themselves:
'The Tao, when brightest seen, seems light to lack;
Who progress in it makes, seems drawing back;
Its even way is like a rugged track.
Its highest virtue from the vale doth rise;
Its greatest beauty seems to offend the eyes;
And he has most whose lot the least supplies.
Its firmest virtue seems but poor and low;
Its solid truth seems change to undergo;
Its largest square doth yet no corner show
A vessel great, it is the slowest made;
Loud is its sound, but never word it said;
A semblance great, the shadow of a shade.'
The Tao is hidden, and has no name; but it is the Tao which is skilful at imparting
to all things what they need and making them complete."
-  Translated by James Legge, 1891, Chapter 41  



"When superior people hear of the Way, they carry it out with diligence.
When middling people hear of the way, it sometimes seems to be there, sometimes not.
When lesser people hear of the Way, they ridicule it greatly.
If they didn't laugh at it, it wouldn't be the Way.
So there are constructive sayings on this: The Way of illumination seems dark, the Way of advancement seems retiring, the Way of equality seems to categorize; higher virtue seems empty, greater purity seems ignominious, broad virtue seems insufficient,
constructive virtue seems careless.
Simple honesty seems changeable, great range has no boundaries, great vessels are finished late; the great sound has a rarefied tone, the great image has no form, the Way hides in namelessness.
Only the Way can enhance and perfect."
-  Translated by Thomas Cleary, 1991, Chapter 41  



"Los estudiantes sabios escuchan al Tao
y lo practican diligentemente.
Los estudiantes mediocres escuchan al Tao
y lo abandonan una y otra vez.
Los estudiantes vulgares escuchan al Tao
y se ríen de él.
Si gente como esa no se riera,
el Tao no sería lo que es.
En consecuencia se dice que:
El pasado brillante parece empañado.
Progresar parece retroceder.
El modo fácil parece arduo.
La mayor Virtud parece vacía.
La gran pureza parece sombría.
La Virtud más sana parece inadecuada.
La fuerza de la Virtud parece frágil.
La Virtud real parece irreal.
El perfecto cuadrado parece sin ángulos.
Los grandes talentos maduran tarde.
Las notas más agudas son difíciles de oír.
Las más grandes formas no tienen forma.
El Tao es oculto y sin nombre.
Sólo el Tao alimenta y
logra que todo se realice."
-  Translation from Wikisource, 2013, Capitulo 41




"The true student hears of the Tao; he is diligent and practices it.
The average student hear of it; sometimes he appears to be attentive, then again he is inattentive.
The half hearted student hears of it; he loudly derides it.
If it did not provoke ridicule it would not be worthy of the name Tao.
Again there are those whose only care is phraseology.
The brilliancy of the Tao is an obscurity;
the advance of the Tao is a retreat;
the equality of the Tao is an inequality;
the higher energy is as cosmic space;
the greatest purity is as uncleanness;
the widest virtue is as if insufficient;
established virtue is as if furtive;
the truest essence is as imperfection;
the most perfect square is cornerless;
the largest vessel is last completed;
the loudest sound has fewest tones;
the grandest conception is formless.
The Tao is concealed and nameless,
yet it is the Tao alone which excels in imparting and completing."
-  Translated by C. Spurgeon Medhurst, 1905, Chapter 41  






Chapter and Thematic Index (Concordance) to the Tao Te Ching



Taoism: A Selected Reading List



 A typical webpage created by Mike Garofalo on a Chapter of the Tao Te Ching (Daodejing) by Lao Tzu (Laozi) includes at least 16 different translations or interpolations of the Chapter in English, two Spanish translations, the Chinese characters for the Chapter, a Wade-Giles and Hanyu Pinyin Romanization of the Mandarin Chinese words for the Chapter, recommended reading lists, a detailed bibliography, indexing by key words and terms for the Chapter, and other resources for the Chapter.  






Saturday, October 18, 2025

No Kings Day

 I support the No Kings Day Protest Demonstrations
 Around the United States.

I object to the dictatorial manner of our current incompetent President.


Friday, October 17, 2025

Iconic Posture: A Picture to Represent a Taijiquan Form


Repost from April 3, 2016:

There are many movements in a posture sequence called Single Whip in the Yang or Chen Styles of Taijiquan.   A short Yang Style Form has 24 postures (movements, forms, action sequences), and short Chen Style Form has 18 postures.   

"Fu Zhongwen uses a number of terms that require additional explanation.  One of these is the term for what is typically called the ending postures of the forms, that is, the terminus point of a given posture such as White Crane Displays Wings.  The term that Fu Zhongwen uses for these ending postures is dingdian, or "fixed points."  In Taijiquan, however, these "fixed points" are not really fixed, and "ending postures" are not really the end of anything.  Fu Zhongwen therefore advises the reader that " as each movement reaches a fixed point (dingdian), one must accomplish what is called "seems to stop, does not stop."  The dingdian, then must be understood to be both the culmination of one sequence as well as the beginning of the next."
 -  Mastering Yang Style Taijiquan  By Fu Zhongwen.  Translated by Louis Swaim.  Blue Snake Books, 2006, p. xix.  


The dingdian is an experienced physical posture, a temporary fixed form, a still photograph, a line drawing, a mental picture, an icon, a temporary fixed point in a flow of movements, a name for a fixed point somewhere in or near the end of a particular numbered posture sequence in a taijiquan form.  Here is Yang Cheng Fu's version of the dingdian for Single Whip Left:




Looks like Virabadrasana II in Hatha Yoga.  Just hold the above posture, don't move, settle, endure, tough it out.  Hold for one minute, then shift to right leg forward lunge in Single Whip Right for one more minute.  Hold for longer periods for increased intensity.    
Yang Taijiquan Quotes and Notes

Yang Style Standard 24 Form Taijiquan

Yang Family Style Taijiquan Long 108 Form





Tuesday, October 14, 2025

The Dumpling Discourse

 The Fireplace Records, Chapter 44


The Dumpling Discourse


It was a hot day in July when Carol and Adolf met in a tea shop in Portland. They sipped iced tea and chatted about Taoism for an hour.

Adolf asked Carol, "What is beyond the Tao?" Carol answered, "Either the Dark Void or preparing hot oatmeal."

Adolf sarcastically replied, "Yunmen is direct, he says '"Dumplings.' You are caught in either/or, dualisms, and straying from the spot!" Carol said "Purported Zen Masters seldom cook."

Adolf raised his right hand, like Gutei, and gave Carol the middle finger. Carol slapped the finger of his right hand.

Adolf got up and went to the toilet. While urinating, like Master Omori Sogen, he was suddenly awakened. While he was away, Carol left for home.

She worked in her home garden. She weeded and watered. She picked two squash. Like the Tao, she grew living beings. She went indoors and cooked some hot oatmeal. She added raisins to the mush. She ate. She smiled. Her dark blue bowl was then empty. She was ordinary and clear mined. 

Comments, Sources, Observations, Koans, Poems, Quips:

Omori Sogen, "Introduction to Zen Training" Tuttle, 2001,2020.

"What is talk transcending the Buddhas and Patriarchs?", Yunmen's translated answers "Sesame Cakes", "Rice cakes", "Dumplings."
See BOS 78, ZE 42, ENT 88, WWSF 348, BCR 77

Gutei's One Finger Zen
BCR 19, BOS 84, DSMS 245, GB 30, SOH 21

If the answer can be 'the oak tree in the courtyard,' then the answer can be 'eating oatmeal with raisins.'

Irrelevant answers are a staple spontaniety of Zen tricksters. 

Some say nonsensical Zen Koan answers are free and natural poety; however, they are often just bad poetry.

Which finger was the "one finger?"

People are Makers, Imitating the Dao - The Great Maker, Doer, Creator.  Sometimes even seeming to go Beyond the Dao.



636 Riddles, Jokes, Witticisms, Humor

Refer to my Cloud Hands Blog Posts on the topic of Koans/Stories. 

Subject Index to 1,975 Zen Buddhist Koans

Zen Buddhist Koans: Indexes, Bibliography, Commentary, Information

The Daodejing by Laozi

Pulling Onions  Over 1,043 One-line Sayings, Quips, Maxims, Humor

Chinese Chan Buddhist and Taoist Stories and Koans

The Fireplace Records (Blog Version) By Michael P. Garofalo

The Spirit of Gardening


Monday, October 13, 2025

Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu, Chapter 40

Daodejing, Laozi
Chapter 40

"The movement of the Tao
By contraries proceeds;
And weakness marks the course
Of Tao's mighty deeds.
All things under heaven sprang from It as existing and named.
That existence sprang from It as non-existent and not named."
-  Translated by James Legge, 1891, Chapter 40    




"Reversion is the action of Tao.
   Gentleness is the function of Tao.
The things of this world come from Being,
   And Being (comes) from Non-being."
-  Translated by Lin Yutang, 1955, Chapter 40    


"In Tao the only motion is returning;
The only useful quality, weakness.
For though all creatures under heaven are the products of Being,
Being itself is the product of Not-being."
-  Translated by Arthur Waley, 1934, Chapter 40  



"Reversion is the action of the Dao.
 Softness is the function of the Dao.
 The myriad things under Heaven achieve life in existence.
 Existence arises from nothingness."
 -  Translation Richard Lynn, Chapter 40  




反者道之動.
弱者道之用. 
天下萬物生於有.
有生於無.
-  Chinese Characters, Tao Te Ching, Chapter 40  


fan zhe dao zhi dong, 
ruo zhe dao zhi yong. 
tian xia wan wu sheng yu you.   
you sheng yu wu.
-  Pinyin Romanization, Daodejing, Chapter 40   




"The movement of Tao in the course of time is to return to Simplicity;
 The working of Tao is so subtle that is ostensible effect may not be immediately noticeable.
 Myriad things and creatures on Earth were originated from something;
 This something describable by us was launched ultimately from nothing which is beyond our description."
 -  Translated by Lee Sun Chen Org, Chapter 40 
 




"Interaction of the opposites is the sphere of Tao activity.
The Highest Subtlety is one of the most important qualities of Tao.
It is opposed by coarse qualities of evil people. 
All the development of incarnate beings goes on in interaction of these opposites.
Yet, the very world of matter originated from the Subtlest Source."
-  Translated by Mikhail Nilolenko, Chapter 40    



"El movimiento del Tao es retornar;
El uso del Tao es aceptar;
Todas las cosas derivan del Tao,
El Tao no deriva de ninguna."
-  Translated by Antonio Rivas Gonzálvez, 1998, Capitulo 40



"The movement of the Tao is a returning,
And weakness marks its course, to our discerning,
But heaven and earth and everything from its existence came,
And existence, from the non-existent spurning."
-  Translated by Isaac Winter Heysinger, 1903, Chapter 40  


"Tao moves in cycles;
Tao functions through softness.
All is born of nothing.
Something is born of nothing."
-  Translated by Tam C. Gibbs, 1981, Chapter 40   




Chapter and Thematic Index (Concordance) to the Tao Te Ching



Taoism: A Selected Reading List



 A typical webpage created by Mike Garofalo on a Chapter of the Tao Te Ching (Daodejing) by Lao Tzu (Laozi) includes at least 16 different translations or interpolations of the Chapter in English, two Spanish translations, the Chinese characters for the Chapter, a Wade-Giles and Hanyu Pinyin Romanization of the Mandarin Chinese words for the Chapter, recommended reading lists, a detailed bibliography, indexing by key words and terms for the Chapter in English, Spanish, and the Wade-Giles Romanization, and other resources for the Chapter.  




 

Sunday, October 12, 2025

One Picture of Me

 

One Picture of Me

By Mike Garofalo



When Laurence asked for poems on the theme of "Self-Portrait" I though of a long philosophical poem I wrote about the interrelated subjects of Picturing and Describing. 

One set of examples I used in that long poem was the human skull. I spoke of memories of Halloween in East Los Angeles, where Mexican Skulls, calaveras, filled displays on El Dia De La Muerte. Meaningful from artistic and religious perspectives.

The brief poem I'm sharing today is a excerpt about my own skull as Pictured by medical imaging, and described by me and interpreted by the oral surgeon.


"This bony skull of mine
electrified
pictured onscreen for me.
     Doctor recommends
     some oral surgery.

The brain disappeared,
an empty space
sliced from
X Ray images retraced.
Eyeless in inner space.

Monkey nose holes,
bony eye glasses,
teeth glowing in the dark.
     Inner spaces never seen
     underneath my very being.

Skinless, noseless, earless,
a shape, a form—
     the images informed.
Stripping away the unneeded,
revealing my inner core."


So, as we all know, a single picture or image can cause a flow of ideas, interpretations, and feelings in our minds.

Or, just two words can please, excite or inflame our minds. Our lover's name can explode our feelings.

But, just two other words can frighten our moral being.

For example, 

Donald Trump ...
[pause, raise your elbow]

Kick Him Out. 

See you on the street next Saturday.


The above "brief poem" will be printed in
The SkullCrushing Hummingbird
Zine #7
, in Portland, Oregon,
on 10/12/2025.


Commentary: Off the Cuff


So, considering, have you ever seen
a picture or a video or a drawing
of a Skull Crushing Hummingbird,
crushing an insect's Skull
with its tiny beak or flashing wings?

No, you have not,
and that is just one reason why,
you don't believe
that Skull Crushing Hummingbirds
are really alive.

However,
Words, context, technical knowledge,
and intent claim meaningfulness,
even truth,
in addition to any pictures viewed.
The surgeon and I see differently.

Sometimes, though, we reader's prefer
fantasies and fictional
Skull Crushing Hummingbirds
to any ho-hum boring beings-
a moniker for fun memories.


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Pictures mirroring things
displaying aspects of reality
uncovering hidden realms of being
pointing to more clear correspondence.
Show me a good picture - Please!

We drew pictures in caves
Heroes pictured in statues
Books illustrated pictured facts
Drones picture our towns from above
Hubble sends us clear pictures of Space

Our brains are
Picture processing ... Machines-
and you can picture mindfulness
you can picture your intent verbally...
picturing is a form of meaningfulness.

Science and technology have
invented new ways of picturing
so we can see into Reality
and open our ordinary eyes
to new ways of seeing.

Picturing - Defining
Planning - Imagining
Painting - Photography
Reflecting - Mimicking
Do I see what I mean?

Wittgenstein in the Tractatus of 1921
Used Pictures and Picturing as the
criterion of meaningfulness and truth.
Wittgenstein in the Investigations of 1953
changed to talking about our talking
about, in ordinary words, aspects of Picturing.

The best pictures, the best descriptions,
how we talk in everyday ways,
point to correspondence, mirroring,
a theory of epistemology.
Richard Rorty disagreed.


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Bundled Up, Volume 1
Quintains, Pentastichs, Tankas

Gushen Grove Sonnets

Highway 101 and 1: A Docu-Poem
California, Oregon, Washington

25 Steps and Beyond
The Poetry by Mike Garofalo


Travels on Highway 101: At the Edges of the West

 




At the Edges of the West

By Mike Garofalo

Travels on US Highway 101 and 1

Memories of Pacific Coast Places
West Coast Snapshots & Snippets
Delightful Coastal Spur Roads

Docu-Poem, Haiku, Short Poems, Photos,
Sonnets, Quintains, Graphics, Concrete Poems

Highway 101 and 1: Docu-Poem
By Mike Garofalo

Alphabetical Index of Titles


Beachcombing and Tidepooling

Big Sur

Bottom Line

Bridges Over Rivers

East Los Angeles Revisited

El Camino Real

Campfires Smoking

Clear Cut

Cliffside at Bandon Beach

The Clock Ticks Within the Mind

Concrete/Shape Poetry

Coos Bay South to Point Reyes

Disappearing Darkness

Down for the Count

Down South

Embodied Time

The Eucalyptus Trees at Tomales Bay

Eye to Eye Memories

Fields of Cream

Fire! Fire!

Flowers in the Sky

A Fork in the Crypto Road

Funky Artist's Enclaves

Fun Times Ahead

Grayland Beach Guides

Gushen Grove Sonnets

Haiku and Senryu

Hip Woke West

Hood Canal: Beauty and Bounty

In a Watery Grave

In the Shadows of Mountains

Industries Booming

Cliffside at Bandon Beach

Lighthouses On the Cliffs

Meeting at the Golden Gate

Myrtlewood and Shells Alive

Night Camp at Pistol River

Notes and Reminders

The Olympic Curve on 101

Petaluma Cool

Places and Times Intertwined

Quatrains Bundled Up

Raven Broke Open the Magical Clam

Reminder from the Other World

River People North

The Rotting Redwood Tree

Salinas Valley Farms

The Salmon are Back

SanFran and L.A. Lives

Sciences Strong

The Scissors of My Decisions

Secrets of Night

Shallow Willapa Bay at Low Tide

Sitting by the Still Bay

Skeletons in Love

Slouching Into Incoherence

Snapshots from the Shore

Stepping Over Epiphanies

Summer in the Sun

Surfing Way

Timber Empire

25 Steps and Beyond

2+2 = 4: Now and Forever More

West Coast Ideologies

Winter at the Shore

 

 


 

Saturday, October 11, 2025

Darwin Revisited

While resting quietly, I have been reading books on the history of science, evolutionary biology, and a biography of Charles Darwin (1809-1882).  These books will keep me fascinated and busy for a few weeks.  I have read all or parts of these books before 2017.  

The "Annotated Origin" is an outstanding volume.  I am always amazed at Darwin's use of many interesting and cogent examples to illustrate his key points of theory.  Beings change over generations based on lived circumstances.  We don't need supernatural causes to explain how beings have existed and changed over time.  


"The History of Science" by Stephen F. Mason.  Collier, 1956.

"The Annotated Origin: A Facsimile of the First Edition of On the Origin of the Species."  By Charles Darwin.  Annotated by James  T. Costa.  Belknap Press of the Harvard University Press, 2009.  Indices, references, biographies, appendices, 537 pages.  ISBN: 9780674032811.  

"The Greatest Show on Earth" by Richard Dawkins.  

"Darwin: The Life of a Tormented Evolutionist" by Adrian Desmond and James Moore.  Norton, 1994, 868 pages.  The Darwin biography was detailed, comprehensive, historically fascinating, and very interesting to me.  Life in London, and Down House, from 1840-1880, is well documented in this book.  






Friday, October 10, 2025

Does Your College Women's Soccer Team Need a Very Good Center Defender?

 

Subject: Recruiting: A Noteworthy Center Defender: Makenna Flinn

Makenna Erin Flinn is an excellent Center Defender for the Skyview High School Girl’s Varsity Soccer Team in Vancouver, Washington. 

Makenna Flinn was awarded First Team Soccer Defender in 2024 in the 4A Greater St. Helens District League. Skyview won the St. Helens League title in 2024.

Makenna is a Senior, and she is a straight A student. She plans to study to become a Physician’s Assistant. She is an officer for both the DECA Entrepreneurial Business Club and the Medical Club at Skyview.

She has lettered in three varsity seasons in both soccer and track and field. In soccer, she has played the entire game in every game for two years.

Makenna is tall, fast, strong, smart, quick, and calm. She is a good leader, and a skilled defender. She is a Captain of the Skyview team in 2025.

Information on 2025 Skyview High School Girls Varsity Soccer Team:

As of 10/10/2025, the Skyview record is 8-0-4. In 12 games this year, Skyview has scored 38 goals, given up only 5, and are undefeated. They are currently ranked 3th in the State of Washington in the 4A Division, and 5th in the entire State. This is despite losing two key offensive players suffering season ending injuries, and another key defender being injured for many games.

Makenna (#17) has defended extremely well against top forwards from other schools (Chiawana, Somner, Camas, Ridgefield, and Columbia River) who are already having scholarship offers.

Makenna knows how to help, cooperate with, and encourage the other two Defenders and the Goalie. Her passing to mid-fielders and defenders is accurate and fast. She can play tough and aggressively and keeps fouls to a minimum in critical situations. She often steals the ball and can drive it forward skillfully for 15-25 yards when needed. She closely guards the best Forward Striker in every game.

She is also an offensive threat. In the second half of games, when Skyview is ahead in scoring, she sometimes is switched to playing a Forward Striker. She has scored three goals this year: one off a header into the goal, and one off her foot into the goal, on Skyview offensive corner side kicks; and, one direct shot for goal after good passing back and forth with other Forwards. Not many top-notch Center Defenders score goals.

Makenna has a good work ethic and puts in the gym work and conditioning for extra strength and speed. She is intelligent and coachable. She has played for the Salmon Creek Nemesis Club since the 4th grade, and as a mid-fielder on other Portland teams. She was coached for many years in Nemesis by Coach Tina Frimpong Ellertson; and, now at Skyview for two years by Coach Matt Houghton.

I hope your scouts will watch Makenna Flinn (#17) show her superior defensive prowess in one of Skyview’s upcoming games. The game at Kiggins Stadium in Vancouver on October 21, 2025, will pit Camas against Skyview; and these two teams tied 1-1 on 10/9. Also, I am sure Skyview will be competing in the Washington State Girls Varsity Soccer Finals.

 

A person in a blue uniform kicking a football ball

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For more information and video/film clips of Makenna, please request information from her father: Sean Flinn at Email:  seanflinn12@msn.com


Mike Garofalo

P.S. I have watched Makenna Erin Flinn play for the last seven years.  I am her grandfather. I am supporting her efforts in seeking university studies in medicine and biological science. Obviously, I am also a fan of women’s soccer … go Portland Thorns, go Skyview Storm!!

 

October Morning Mild

A repost from 2013

"O hushed October morning mild,
Thy leaves have ripened to the fall;
Tomorrow's wind, if it be wild,
Should waste them all.
The crows above the forest call;
Tomorrow they may form and go.
O hushed October morning mild,
Begin the hours of this day slow.
Make the day seem to us less brief.
Hearts not averse to being beguiled,
Beguile us in the way you know.
Release one leaf at break of day;
At noon release another leaf;
One from our trees, one far away."
-   Robert Frost, October

October: Poems, Quotes, Sayings, Lore

"Gardening is the slowest of the performing arts."
-  Mac Keith Griswold

The month of October, for us, in Red Bluff, California, means cooler daytime temperatures, some rain, brisk mornings, falling leaves, ripening apples and persimmons, closing down the summertime vegetable garden, planting a winter garden, blooming chrysanthemums, longer walks, pruning, fertilizing, and cleaning up the yard and gardens.  

A few photographs of our garden are included below.  The photographs were all taken by Karen Garofalo in October 2013.






Wednesday, October 08, 2025

Don't Do Unto Others

                      The Fireplace Records, Chapter 33


Don't Do Unto Others


An acquaintance of mine, a devout Catholic, ends all his email letters with "Love, Arthur."

He has frequently mentioned the Biblical verse "Thou shalt love thy neighbor as thyself." (Matthew 22: 38)  Love and loving phrases pepper his conversations. 

My underlying feeling was that these references to "love" were rather insincere and somewhat ungrounded, since I could not understand how two people with radically different opinions about life, religion, and politics could actually "love" one another; socialize and tolerate maybe, but "love," unlikely.  

In my teenage years, I questioned how this verse would apply to people who don't like themselves, hate themself, are ashamed of themself, denigrate themself, or don't love themselves in the slightest, etc. They would seem quite handicapped or incapable of loving their neighbor, insofar as they don't love themselves. On the opposite side, self-respect and self-love has some positive connotations, and can lead to loving others; however, carried to excess it becomes flawed and appears as egotism and narcissism.

I grew up in East Los Angeles, in the Bandini Barrio, for 20 years. It was a low income suburban LA neighborhood. I had a few friends and some good neighbors. However, as with most suburban neighborhoods, I did not know or have any relationships with 96% of my neighbors. I did not love them, nor did I have any opinion or emotion regarding them other than live and let live, let's stay at peace, and mind your own business. "Loving" them was not my concern; and, I had no ill will towards people I did not know. 

I also read, "In everything, do to others what you would have them do to you." (Matthew 7:12) If I wanted hard drugs, does this mean I should give or sell hard drugs to others? If I thought I should be severely punished if I chose not to follow Catholic doctrines, does this give me license to severely punish non-believers? If someone liked perverted sexual play, should they being doing these acts with others? Knowing that others have cheated me, should I cheat others? This moral maxim had some good applications; and, some bad/evil/wrong/destructive applications.  

In high school in 1961, I read Confucian texts.  I came across the Confucian maxim "Don't do to others what you don't want done to you." (Analects, V. 12, VI. 30, 500 BCE)  This ethical/moral/behavioral advice seemed to resonate with me more than the Christian advice. I thought I could apply this maxim more effectively in my daily life with the many people I encountered but did not know, or love. It was a way of caring for others by not harming them. I have tied to follow this practical maxim for six decades.


Comments, Sources, Observations

Gold is malleable, soft, valued, and long lasting; but, limited in other ways.
Rather than a ruler of gold, a flexible cloth tape is more practical.
Rules are useful if properly and intelligently applied.
Acknowledging exceptions to rules is a good rule to apply sometimes. 
The disadvantages loving yourself to excess are numerous.
"Love" is often just another boring cliche, a charming metaphor.
A church sign says "God is Love!" The Devil also loves his work.
Liking, preferring, and loving are cousins, sometimes distant cousins.
Yes, gold is valuable; but of what value is this value?

"Love" is rarely mentioned in Zen Koans; maybe 6 times out of 1,975 Koans. Egoistic-restraint, kindness without reciprocity, control of desires, patience, gentleness, helpfulness, asceticism, toughening, and wisdom are emphasized more.  


Golden Rule - Wikipedia

Ten Reasons Why Self-Love is Bad


Refer to my Cloud Hands Blog Posts on the topic of Koans/Stories. 

Subject Index to 1,975 Zen Buddhist Koans

Zen Buddhist Koans: Indexes, Bibliography, Commentary, Information



The Daodejing by Laozi

Pulling Onions  Over 1,043 One-line Sayings by Mike Garofalo

Chinese Chan Buddhist and Taoist Stories and Koans

The Fireplace Records  By Michael P. Garofalo


Tuesday, October 07, 2025

Dao De Jing, Laozi, Chapter 39

Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu
Chapter 39


"These are they which from of Old have obtained Unity.
Heaven obtained Unity by purity;
he earth obtained Unity by repose;
Spiritual beings obtained Unity by lack of bodily form;
The valleys obtained Unity by fulness;
All beings obtained Unity by life;
Princes and people obtained Unity by being under the rule of Heaven.
These all obtained permanence by Unity.
The innermost of Heaven is purity, if not so, it would be obscured;
The innermost of Earth is repose, it not so, it would disintegrate;
The innermost of spiritual beings is lack of bodily form, if not so, they would die;
The innermost of valleys is fulness of water, if not so, they would be sterile;
The innermost of creatures is life, if not so, they would perish.
The high honour of prince and people is in their being together under the rule of Inner Life, if not so, they would soon lose harmony,
The root of honour is in humility,
The standpoint of high estate is in lowliness.
That is why prince and people call themselves orphans, solitary men, chariots without wheels.
The active principle of their Unity is in lowliness.
Who can deny this?
If you take a chariot to pieces, you have no chariot (it has lost its Unity).
Do not desire to be isolated as a single gem, nor to be lost in a crowd as pebbles on the beach."
-  Translated by Isabella Mears, 1916, Chapter 39



"The things which from of old have got the One, the Tao, are: 
Heaven which by it is bright and pure;
Earth rendered thereby firm and sure;
Spirits with powers by it supplied;
Valleys kept full throughout their void
All creatures which through it do live
Princes and kings who from it get
The model which to all they give.
All these are the results of the One, the Tao.  
If heaven were not thus pure, it soon would rend;
If earth were not thus sure, it would break and bend;
Without these powers, the spirits soon would fail;
If not so filled, the drought would parch each vale;
Without that life, creatures would pass away;
Princes and kings, without that moral sway,
However grand and high, would all decay.
Thus it is that dignity finds its firm root in its previous meanness, and what is lofty finds its stability in the lowness from which it rises. 
Hence princes and kings call themselves 'Orphans,' 'Men of small virtue,' and as 'Carriages without a nave.'
Is not this an acknowledgment that in their considering themselves mean they see the foundation of their dignity?
So it is that in the enumeration of the different parts of a carriage we do not come on what makes it answer the ends of a carriage.
They do not wish to show themselves as elegant-looking as jade, but prefer to be coarse-looking as an ordinary stone."
-   Translated by James Legge, 1891, Chapter 39 



"Of old, these attained the One: Heaven attaining the One Became clear.
Earth attaining the One Became stable.
Spirits attaining the One Became sacred.
Valleys attaining the One Became bountiful.
Myriad beings attaining the One Became fertile.
Lords and kings attaining the One Purified the world.
If Heaven were not clear, It might split.
If Earth were not stable, It might erupt.
If spirits were not sacred, They might fade.
If valleys were not bountiful, They might wither.
If myriad beings were not fertile, They might perish.
If rulers and lords were not noble, They might stumble.
Therefore, Noble has humble as its root, High has low as its foundation.
Rulers and lords call themselves Poor and lonely orphans.
Isn't this using humility as a root?
They use many carriages, But have no carriage;.
They do not desire to glisten like jade, But drop like a stone."
-  Translated by Stephen Addis, 1993, Chapter 39  



"The wholeness of life has, from of old, been made manifest in its parts:
Clarity has been made manifest in heaven,
Firmness in earth,
Purity in the spirit,
In the valley conception,
In the river procreation;
And so in a leader ate the people made manifest
For wholeness of use.
But for clarity heaven would be veiled,
But for firmness earth would have crumbled,
But for purity spirit would have fumbled,
But for conception the valley would have failed,
But for procreation the river have run dry;
So, save for the people, a leader shall die:
Always the low carry the high
On a root for growing by.
What can stand lofty with no low foundation?
No wonder leaders of a land profess
Their stature and their station
To be servitude and lowliness!
If rim and spoke and hub were not,
Where would be the chariot?
Who will prefer the jingle of jade pendants if
He once has heard stone growing in a cliff!"
-  Translated by Witter Bynner, 1944, Chapter 39 




昔之得一者.
天得一以清.
地得一以寧.
神得一以靈.
谷得一以盈.
萬物得一以生.
侯王得一以為天下貞. 
其致之. 
天無以清 將恐裂.
地無以寧 將恐發.
神無以靈 將恐歇.
谷無以盈 將恐竭. 
萬物無以生將恐滅.
侯王無以貴高將恐蹶. 
故貴以賤為本.
高以下為基. 

是以侯王自稱孤寡不穀. 
此非以賤為本耶非乎.
故致數譽無譽. 
不欲琭琭如玉.
珞珞如石. 
-  Chinese characters, Tao Te Ching, Chapter 39 



xi zhi de yi zhe.   
tian de yi yi qing.   
di de yi yi ning.   
shen de yi yi ling.
gu de yi yi ying.   
wan wu de yi yi sheng.   
hou wang de yi yi wei tian xia zhen. 
qi zhi zhi.
tian wu yi qing jiang kong lie.   
di wu yi ning jiang kong fa.   
shen wu yi ling jiang kong xie.   
gu wu yi ying jiang kong jie.   
wan wu wu yi sheng jiang kong mie.   
hou wang wu yi gui gao jiang kong jue. 
gu gui yi jian wei ben.   
gao yi xia wei ji.  
shi yi hou wang zi wei gu gua bu gu. 
ci fei yi jian wei ben ye fei hu? 
gu zhi shu yu wu yu. 
bu yu lu lu ru yu.   
luo luo ru shi.
-   Pinyin Romanization, Daodejing, Chapter 39  




"The masters of old attained unity with the Tao.
Heaven attained unity and became pure.
The earth attained unity and found peace.
The spirits attained unity so they could minister.
The valleys attained unity that they might be full.
Humanity attained unity that they might flourish.
Their leaders attained unity that they might set the example.
This is the power of unity.

Without unity, the sky becomes filthy.
Without unity, the earth becomes unstable.
Without unity, the spirits become unresponsive and disappear.
Without unity, the valleys become dry as a desert.
Without unity, human kind can't reproduce and becomes extinct.
Without unity, our leaders become corrupt and fall.

The great view the small as their source,
and the high takes the low as their foundation.
Their greatest asset becomes their humility.
They speak of themselves as orphans and widows,
thus they truly seek humility.
Do not shine like the precious gem,
but be as dull as a common stone."
-  Translated by John H. McDonald, 1996, Chapter 39  



"In harmony with the Tao,
the sky is clear and spacious,
the earth is solid and full,
all creature flourish together,
content with the way they are,
endlessly repeating themselves,
endlessly renewed.

When man interferes with the Tao,
the sky becomes filthy,
the earth becomes depleted,
the equilibrium crumbles,
creatures become extinct.

The Master views the parts with compassion,
because he understands the whole.
His constant practice is humility.
He doesn't glitter like a jewel
but lets himself be shaped by the Tao,
as rugged and common as stone."
-   Translated by Stephen Mitchell, Chapter 39 



"Desde antiguo, los seres que han alcanzado el Uno son:
El cielo por el Uno tuvo la claridad;
La tierra por el Uno tuvo la estabilidad;
El Espíritu por el Uno tuvo la actividad;
El Valle por el Uno tuvo la plenitud.
Por el Uno, todos los seres entraron en la existencia:
Si el cielo no fuese puro, podría desgarrarse.
Si la tierra no fuese estable, podría derrumbarse:
Si el Espíritu no fuese activo, dejaría de existir;
Si el Valle no fuese pleno, se consumiría. 
Sin la potencia creadora de vida, los seres se extinguirían. 
Se reyes y príncipes no fueran gobernantes podrían ser depuestos. 
El noble debe formarse en términos del humilde. 
El de alta posición debe considerar al inferíor como su fundamento. 
Por tanto, reyes y príncipes se llaman a sí mismos (el ignorante, el injusto, el indigno). 
No significa esto que toman al humilde como su origen?"
-  Translated from Chinese into English by Ch'u Ta-Kao, Translated from English into Spanish by Caridad Diaz Faes, Capitulo 39  




"There were those in ancient times possessed of the One;
Through possession of the One, the Heaven was clarified,
Through possession of the One, The Earth was stabilized,
Through possession of the One, the gods were spiritualized,
Through possession of the One, the valleys were made full,
Through possession of the One, all things lived and grew,
Through possession of the One, the princes and dukes
   became the ennobled of the people.
   - that was how each became so.
Without clarity, the Heavens would shake,
Without stability, the Earth would quake,
Without spiritual power, the gods would crumble,
Without being filled, the valleys would crack,
Without the life-giving power, all things would perish,
Without the ennobling power, the princes and dukes would stumble.
therefore the nobility depend upon the common man for support,
And the exalted ones depend upon the lowly for their base.
That is why the princes and dukes call themselves
   "the orphaned," "the lonely one," "the unworthy."
Is is not true then that they depend upon the common man for support?
Truly, take down the parts of a chariot,
   And there is no chariot (left).
Rather than jingle like the jade,
   Rumble like the rocks."
-  Translated by Lin Yutang, 1955, Chapter 39   




Chapter and Thematic Index (Concordance) to the Tao Te Ching



Taoism: A Selected Reading List



 A typical webpage created by Mike Garofalo on a Chapter of the Tao Te Ching (Daodejing) by Lao Tzu (Laozi) includes at least 16 different translations or interpolations of the Chapter in English, two Spanish translations, the Chinese characters for the Chapter, a Wade-Giles and Hanyu Pinyin Romanization of the Mandarin Chinese words for the Chapter, recommended reading lists, a detailed bibliography, indexing by key words and terms for the Chapter in English, Spanish, and the Wade-Giles Romanization, and other resources for the Chapter.  




Monday, October 06, 2025

Quintain Sonnet Fom One (5252) by Mike Garofalo

 Michael P. Garofalo began his detailed study of Quintains and Sonnets in 2021. He began composing poetry in the three "Quintain Sonnet Forms," (555, 5252, 553) which began appearing in 2021 in his online collection of Poetry, The Gushen Grove Sonnets and Bundled Up, Volume 1: Quintains, Pentastichs, and Tankas

His invented term "Quintain Sonnet Forms," refers simply to a short sequence of quintain stanzas, with the total lines of the poem being from 15 to 13 (555, 5252, 553). 5 = quintain,pentastich, tanka, waka; 2 = a couplet; and 3 = a triplet (haiku or senryu). 

The poet composer is free to write quintains with rhyme by formula, free rhyme, blank verse, free verse, or nonsensical word smithing.

Here are some notes on Mike Garofalo's quintain writing style and options.


SM8 Sonnet Model 8

Garofalo Quintain Sonnet Form First

5 2 5 2 = 14 Lines

Quintain Couplet Quintain Couplet

The Couplets are often connected thematically with each other.
Getting the Couplets to rhyme is the best target.

Mike Garofalo has authored and published online over 1,300 Quintains, and has a his own style and options for writing quintains.

Can be rhymed verse, blank verse, or free verse.

Typographically, mostly Left Justified; but with some variations in indentation, spacing, layout.

Makes free use of punctuation.

Some use of hypertext and reference links.

Some authors and Ms. Ai (AI) have suggested using fixed rhyme schemes for 5252 such as:

5 ABABB
2 CC
5 DEDEE
2 FF

Or

5 ABABA
2 CC
5 DDEED
2 FF

"The interlocking rhymes withing each quintain provide a sense of musicality and development, while the two rhyming couplets at the end of each section offer a sense of resolution. Ultimately, the structure (5252) is the defining element of this modern sonnet form. The specific rhyme scheme is left to the poet's creative interpretation. There is no single "official" rhyme scheme for Michael P. Garofalo's 5252 quintain sonnet, as he is the originator of this modern form. Poets writing in this form can adapt the rhyme scheme to fit their own needs and creative expression." - Ms. Ai

 

A Google drop-down Translation Menu. Read the poetry on the webpage in over 50 different languages.

Many of these Sonnets are cellphone readable with ease. However, due to the limitations on the width of the lines on a cellphone screen, these Sonnets can appear to be longer with indentations for the ending of long lines. Viewed on a larger desktop screen, with CTrl+- text adjustment, the same Quintain Sonnet can been seen as just 14 lines. Consequently, this cellphone line length limitation affects the writing style.

 

Examples of the Garofalo Sonnet Form 5252 in The Gushen Grove Sonnets: #1, 2, 4, 9, 10, 13, 21, 23, 32, 39, 931.

Listening to Change #931

I listened to another say
what I resisted to hear
what was alien to me
what outlined my ire
what I wanted to fight

But then I settled down
loosened my blockhead mind

Thought things over patiently,
listened more carefully,
saw matters from other sides,
respected the integrity
and sincerity of other kinds

Of thinking outside my closed boxes
Of my habits of opinions needing overhaul.