Showing posts with label Quintains. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Quintains. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 15, 2026

Attention, Language and Time

 




Attention, Language and Time
Selected Poetry: 2016 - 2026
By Michael P. Garofalo


This WebBook is a collection of poems, quips, quintain stanzas, resource links, Onions, lists, docu-poems, short studies, reality slices, Kernels, concrete and Text-Art poems, sonnets, and hypertext explorations and diversions.
All by Mike Garofalo.

It features lifestyles and locales in the Pacific Northwest.

It traces the evolution of the poetic voices of one old man during a decade.

It essays the front and flanks of Time.


Poetry WebBook, 60 pages, October 2026. No Ads!


Tuesday, September 08, 2026

Seeking a Literary Agent, Editor, and/or Publisher

I am seeking an author's agent, editor, and/or publisher
 to consider my books.

Discover your commercial success possibilities right HERE 
with books by Michael P. Garofalo.

My poetry is unique, creative, direct, experimental, philosophical, and
contemporary. Check out three of my poetry books that are ready for
publication right now:
















Attention, Language and Time
Selected Poetry: 2016 - 2026
By Michael P. Garofalo

WebBook, 60 pages, October, 2026


At the Edges of the West: Highway 101 and 1.
Docu-Poems, Haiku, Photos, TextArt

The Tick-Tock Tractatus:
Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations

Five Corners of Time Eclectic Quintains and Tanka

My Daodejing Anthology and Concordance
is the very best. This Tao Te Ching anthology
is encyclopedic in scope, and well respected.

Other commercial possibilities
can be found at:

Twenty Five Steps and Beyond:
The Collected Works of Mike Garofalo 

Yes, the in-boxes of literary agents are filled to the brim with new manuscripts to read. And, they diligently proceed to try to discover value that will sell.

For a change, just open your web browser and you will find diverse creative work and whole books at my website.

As for reviews of my work, go here.

My 3,700+ Quintain poems at Bundled Up (Volumes 1 - 9) are designed for Ebook
publication. This is a special type of poetry and research for which readers frequently return. My quintain sonnets (5252, 554, 555, 553, 545) are an original formal and structural contribution to the genre.

I have saved $600 to help start this publishing process. I am not interested in talking to anyone who wants me to pay them for all the publishing and distributing of my creative works in paperback, hardback or Ebook formats.

I am seeking an author's agent and/or publisher who can see the possibilities
for commercial success from my writing and my existing books, takes the risks,
works with me on an ongoing basis, gets them published, and takes the lions-share of the profits.

What little money I might make will keep my websites afloat, and the excess
will be given to charity.

I don't have the funds or the time to actively market or promote my works to agents or publishers or the public. I will just let the wide range and value of my creative
works speak for themselves, and their commercial possibilities.

My goal is to write better and more! Since 1998, I have published all my creative work on my many Internet websites and blog.


To Contact Me

Thanks, Michael Peter Garofalo




Thursday, September 03, 2026

Rafting Down the Trinity

Rafting Down the Trinity

The river said go easy, so we pushed off,
      letting the raft find its own argument.
The current kept offering us opportunities:
           a bend, a hush, a Class 3 rapid, a sudden lift.
We followed, not knowing how far trust
           could carry us, only that it kept saying "Yes!"

The rubber raft slipped into its thoughts, a quiet logic...
Twisted by river stones, paddles, muscles, and wind
     and the long drag of downhill cold water.

Sunlight leaned into the canyon,
     finding us still where the current slowed.
There the catfish waited without hurry on the bottom.
We felt the day open, wide as the bend ahead.

Morning slid down the canyon
     and the river took it all in, cool and certain.
Our paddles touched the old stories---
     eddies of lore that encircled everyone.

We rafted the long remembering. Grateful to be included.

Later, the wind arrived, ruffling the surface
           into small disagreements.
We answered with strokes that tried to match
           the river’s impatience.
Even the banks seemed to listen, cottonwoods
leaning in as if our passing mattered,
           though we knew it did not.

The water shook us and we were fully ready,
paddling the raft past the damp bark of the alders.
We let the river tumble us over the large boulders,
bouncing us with a sudden, breathless glee.
Everything we meant to say stayed up on the shore;
only the wordless water mattered, and the joy and laughter.

Paddles touched the hush, the canyon walls held their breath.
Water knows the way.
We follow its old thinking, grateful for the hints it keeps.

Toward evening the canyon settled in dim shadows.
The water gathered its memories.
We followed, quieter now, trusting the way it carried us---
     not toward any lesson, but simply forward-down,
     the river doing what it always does,
     and us grateful to be allowed along.

We stopped, made camp, ate French bread and cheese,
drank wine, talked by the fire...

The River moved on in the darkness.
We dreamed of being tossed off the raft.

  



Water Falls Into the Gorge

We drove out to Dougan Falls in the Spring,
       like salmon moving, drawn in by obscure passions.
I followed the ear-opening sacredness that keeps
       coming back to me in the rain of memories.

The stream doesn't care about a trillion rocks.
It goes because it's been blind for many millenniums;
       unlike what the lanky Douglas Firs discovered
              when standing still for decades in the Gorge winds.

My niece never said much about beauty.
       I parked the car, we joined the crowds,
       walked up to Dougan Falls.
We both looked up and didn't speak.


The noisy songs of Cascadian waterfalls:
from high to low, young to old,
flowing down, colder to cold,
into the Columbia River flowing bold;
till it becomes the salty blood
       in the arteries of Oceanus
beyond the south jetty of Living Time.


Excerpts from:

Watching, Language and Time
Selected Works: 2016 - 2026
By Mike Garofalo
A Free WebBook, 70 Pages




Tuesday, August 18, 2026

The Poetic Investigations: Time: The Tick-Tock Tractatus by Mike Garofalo

The Tick-Tock Tractatus

Speaking About Time: The Poetic Investigations

By Michael Peter Garofalo, mpgarofalo, .m.p.g.

            



 

 

Sections

1. Time: time-space, movement, measurement

2. Past: memories, habits, fixed, specific, tradition

3. Present: now, here-now, day, duration

4. Future: maybe, planned, anticipated, uncertain

5. Passing: change, cycles, aging, growth, death

6. Beginning: renewal, starting, enthusiasm

7. Psychology: learning, experience, knowing

8. Middle: in progress, half-way, steady, living

9. Language: poetry, philosophy, ordinary

10. Silence: inexpressive, nonsense, illogical

11. Mystical: numinous, profound, intense, insightful,

12. Beauty: art, crafts, music, reading/writing

13. Social: ethics, morality, economics, manners, value

14. Philosophy: ethics, history, analysis, arguments, logic

15. History: landmark events, books/printing, memory

16. Eternity: forever, infinite, unimaginable, death

 

Preface

Key to Books Cited

Bundled Up Quintains about Time

Additional Notes




Friday, August 14, 2026

Traces of Differences by Mike Garofalo

 4089.

The time of a claim
Is evidence
Of the claim's truth.
"It was raining"
depends on the day.

 

4090.

Bus Stop Mumbling

a.

a bench holds these
unwritten verbs:
sitting, waiting, holding

b.

cars buzz by the bus stop
two men sit in silence
at the intersection
of waiting and transit

c.

standing at the curb
looking for the green bus
each of us
holding a private memory
of seconds

d.

an electric bike
zips by
silently---
cars roar gasoline

e.

Define: arrival
Define: the space between
here and not-yet-here...
The green bus stopped there!

 

4091.

23C is Perfect for Me

20F = -7C
32F = 0C
40F = 4C
50F = 10C
60F = 15C

70F = 21C
80F = 26C
90F = 32C
100F = 38C
110F = 44C

 

4092.

Air passes before the sun but casts no shadow.
Computers prefer Macintosh apples.
Mathematicians vacation in Times Square.
The evil hen laid deviled eggs.
It would be pointless to use a broken pencil.

 

4093.

Traces of Differences

The square clock counts the taxes of currency, paid to present time.
I tally up the closing years and face the final fee of time.

I cannot find a hitching post to hold the passing days,
The weightless traces of the past are the no-thing marks of ways.

A shredded snake skin curled on the trail is what was left behind,
The fading marks of where we walked become the tracks of time.

An eagle will dive, the wind will blow, and granite will slowly break,
The shifting ways that things interact reveal their intertwining fates.

The chessboard patterns change their shape with every moving hand.
We speak of traces that show our interwoven fates in disappearing land.

 

4094.

because
                            beleagured beings
became                   beligerent
                  bestiality          began

 

Thursday, July 16, 2026

Red Coals Pulse Like Distant Stars

 4051.

Red Coals Pulse Like Distant Stars

The last light slips behind the ridge,
a thin ember of day still glowing.
Boots thud softly on the packed earth,
the air cooling with each step.
Evening begins before we notice.

A match flares against the breeze,
brief and stubborn in the dim.
Paper curls into orange petals,
logs shift as if waking.
Fire learns its shape slowly.

Smoke threads upward in loose spirals,
finding its own quiet route.
A kettle hums near the campfire coals,
steam rising like a soft prayer.
Night accepts our presence.

Tall trunks stand just beyond the glow,
their crowns lost to the dark.
The fire paints their bark in strokes
of copper, rust, and shadow.
Even giants enjoy a little warmth.

Voices soften as the flames steady,
words drifting like sparks.
Some tales are true, some nearly so,
all of them shaped by the night.
The campfire listens without judgment.

Logs collapse inward with a sigh,
a slow settling of heat and memory.
Red coals pulse like distant stars,
steady, patient, unhurried.
The night grows deeper around them.

The fire shrinks to a quiet glow,
its edges soft as worn cloth.
Ash gathers in pale drifts,
the remains of what kept us warm.
Nothing ends abruptly out here.

The final spark dims into silence,
leaving only the scent of smoke.
Stars settle into their places,
unbothered by our small rituals.
The forest closes gently around us.

Sunday, July 05, 2026

Bundled Up, Quintain Poetry, Volume 7

 3987.

250th Anniversary Fireworks Booming,
     American jets screaming by...
Patriotic speeches for tired ears,
Corporate TV selling booze and lies---
          I sat under a cloud of disappointment.

 

3988.

     She found her son dead
     on the floor beside his bed
with mouth agape and eyes surprised
he a motionless slump of breathless death;
still and cold.      A silver crucifix on his neck.

 

3989.

Time can be squandered, stolen,
     wasted, lost.
Time can be invested, used,
     divided up, and at a cost.

Time cannot be saved.

 

3990.

          The dull knife of Zen
               can't cut, can't slice;
fit for hacking up the weeds
of stifling random thoughts---
understated knots sometime loosening.

 

3991.

     Thigh chest, short breath,
          Tired legs, stiff back,
               Headache, need rest...
     Departing sun, clouds come,
Sitting still --- Hike Done!

 

3992.

     Comets cross clear skies
Fiery streaks flash and fade;
Asteroid showers in the Eastern Night
Remind us of the heavenly strife---
     Burning rocks in final flight.

 

3993.

April comes between March and May,
       somewhere in the Spring Season it prayed.
Verbs telling time in a web of words,
       e.g., just needed 'ed' for a phoneme, say.

Words love to embrace other words,
       sometimes free of any thing anyway.
Nature does not say "April", we do;
       Nature shows 'April' in tenuous ways.

To be human is to speak often
       of years, seasons,
              months, weeks, and days.

 

3994.

While the El Nino storm so stark and bold
Makes the canvas yurt walls rattle, yet hold;
I wrapped myself in blankets against the cold.

I sipped on coffee, and chewed on cold jerky---

Startled by branches Smacking the roof.

 

3995.

"And I realize that this
Transcendent architecture
Lost in the forest where no one passes
Is itself the Net of Indra
The compound infinities of infinities,

The Flower Wreath,
Each universe reflecting
Every other, reflecting
Itself from every other
And the moon the single thought

That populates the Void.
The night grows still more still. No
Sound at all, only a flute
Playing soundlessly in the
Circle of dancing Gopis"

- Kenneth Rexroth, On Flower Wreath Hill

Indra's Net

Gopis

 

3996.

BEWARE: Windy Day

In my backyard
within 70 yards
     are swaying slowly...
19 Douglas Firs
100 feet high.

 

3997.

Time Leaves the Window Behind

Time loosens her sandals in the garden,
she rests among rosemary and rocks.
A breeze turns the pages of the afternoon,
and in each moment the leaves are briefly lifted
before settling back into the long green now.

Time stands on the lawn like statue of steel,
peering through the glass at the lamp’s bright eye.
The rug inside unspools a river of dark thread,
where the chairs are briefly islands in quilts,
and the house is a secret folded into the hours.

 

3998.

My mouth harp slides on my soft lips.
In breath, out breath, call up a tune:
a sweet, a gentle, a lonesome tune.

My melodies flow, then go,
into the emptiness of pure silence so slow.

 

3999.

Owl Time

Motionless quiet on a cedar branch.
Severe eyes survey the edges of shadows.
A light fog rolls over the forest floor.
     A field mouse scurries by a rotting log---
     silent wings slice the bloody night.

 

4000.

Glued to a cellphone.........
     Isolated, alone, eyes on a screen!!
Time lost in a scrolling addiction,
          Mesmerized and entrapped---
Curiosity killed Us hypnotized Rats.


Bundled Up:

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Original Quintain Poetry By Mike Garofalo

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Bundled Up, Volume 8
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Friday, May 08, 2026

The Five Corners of Time by Mike Garofalo


 

Bundled Up

By Mike Garofalo

 

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Quintain Poems 4,000 - 4,500

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The Tick-Tock Tractatus
Speaking about Time: The Poetic Investigations

 

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202 Eclectic Quintains and Onions
By Mike Garofalo
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Sunday, April 26, 2026

Tick-Tock Tractatus, Section 12.6

 A Gardener's Sutra on Time

By mpgarofalo

The Tick-Tock Tractatus, Section 12.6

The Tick-Tock Tractatus

Speaking About Time: The Poetic Investigations

By Michael Peter Garofalo, mpgarofalo, .m.p.g.

            


Sections

1. Time: time-space, movement, measurement

2. Past: memories, habits, fixed, specific, tradition

3. Present: now, here-now, day, duration

4. Future: maybe, planned, anticipated, uncertain

5. Passing: change, cycles, aging, growth, death

6. Beginning: renewal, starting, enthusiasm

7. Psychology: learning, experience, knowing

8. Middle: in progress, half-way, steady, living

9. Language: poetry, philosophy, ordinary

10. Silence: inexpressive, nonsense, illogical

11. Mystical: numinous, profound, intense, insightful,

12. Beauty: art, crafts, music, reading/writing

13. Social: ethics, morality, economics, manners, value

14. Philosophy: ethics, history, analysis, arguments, logic

15. History: landmark events, books/printing, memory

16. Eternity: forever, infinite, unimaginable, death

 

Preface

Key to Books Cited

Bundled Up Quintains about Time

Additional Notes


12.6

Pulling Onions

By Michael P. Garofalo

 

 

Pulling Onions

Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations, Part 2
Another Crop of Gardening Thoughts
A Gardener's Sutra on Time, Part 2.1

Red Bluff, California
1998 - 2017
By: .m.p.g.
michael p garofalo

 

A Gardener's Sutra on Time
by mpgarofalo

 

A garden recreates itself daily; we seldom
     step into the same garden thrice.

The present is made from the past.
Time creeps, walks, runs and flies---
     it is all about moving things.
Chaos breaks its own rules to allow Order to play.

 

How can gardening be considered
     a "leisure time" activity?
Always leave extra time for unraveling the hose.

Gardeners turn into the soil their lifetime.
Time may wait for no man,
     but seems to muddle and poke
     quite slowly for gardeners.

Springtime for birth, Summertime for growth;
     and all Seasons for dying.
We don't erase the past, we just build more
     and bigger blackboards.


Put the right plant in the right place at the right time in
     the right way - and you won't go wrong.
Winter does not turn into Summer; ash does not turn
     into firewood - on the chopping block of time.
A garden flourishes in the mind's time of last season,
     next season, and now.
Gardening requires no commuting time.
In the right place at the right time,
     tomato worms on tomato vines.

 

The Onion Garden, a concrete poem by .m.p.g.

 

Your pocket knife will be its dullest at just the right time.
Gardening is the right sport for a lifetime of pleasures.
Gardening sometimes takes a few hours of a day,
     but adds weeks of pleasure to your life.
The time you have wasted on your garden
     is what makes it priceless.
One purpose of a garden is to stop time in one place.

 

Annuals disappear, shrubs perish, trees die, and
     gardeners are buried; death is the flower of time.
In an instant there is nothing - Time produces Nature.
By the time you peel off five layers of reality,
     it's hard to recall the first.
It's a long time between my garden
     and the Pacific Ocean.
Time will tell, but we often fail to listen.


The "eternal truths" are sometimes clearly false.
Gardening teaches us to take our time, slow down,
     and wait in peace.
Gardeners learn to live in worm time,
     bee time, and seed time.
Time will not pass you, but it will follow
     very close behind you.
Preparation and follow up take up
     more time than doing the deed.

Springtime flows in our veins.
Silence - never misquoted, sometimes misunderstood,
     often meaningful.
Leave enough time for some pointless behavior
     to reveal your deeper desires.
The seed idea for "God" is springtime.
Things always go downhill, fall apart, wear out...
     the arrow of Time pierces everything.

 

Time prevents too much from happening at once.
A million years and a second have the same
     feeling for the dead gardener.
All metaphors aside - only living beings rise up in the Springtime;
     dead beings stay quite lie down dead.
Any gardener who is not using the scientific method
     will waste time and money.
Take the time to melt into the Details.

Time is rooted in Place.
Most of the time, we just borrow from the past.
Sometimes the present alters our interpretation of the past;
     most often the past surrounds and infects the present.
Time is on your side when you are young.
Leisure can open a window to the breezes of insights,
     and a clear view of the Trees of Time.

 

Harvesting Onions 2006
Red Bluff, California
.m.p.g.

 

We get things done when there is little time left.
Our cash limits and time constraints both prune our gardens.
The second hand of time ticks on---
     measuring our past, time after time.
Beings are Becomings---for the time-being.

Perfection can be the opponent of betterment.
Without vagueness we are bored with literalness.
Borderline cases are where events become really interesting.
I may not be able to precisely define religious nonsense,
     but I know it when I hear it.

A coastline may be impossible to measure,
     but is still beautiful.
You can’t slowly boil the frog unless
     it can’t jump out of the pot.
A “heap” of something desired becomes an issue
     when the price is discussed.
Gratefully, shit happens!
The ten thousand things are more enchanting
     than the Silent One.


Walking needs earth, space, and the walker.
Sometimes, just one 'thing' is critical
     because twenty other 'things' are just so.
Gardening is a kind of deadheading---
     keeping us from going to seed.
Don't interfere, be still, and listen to the litanies of bees.

Tooth and nail, and the stench of a dead animal on the wind.
When life gives you onions, it stinks.
A rake is spaces held together by steel.
In the student's mind there are few possibilities,
     in the teacher's mind there are many;
          but only time to realize very few.

 

Mother Nature is always pregnant.
Time creeps, walks, runs and flies -
     it is all about moving things.
Dogmatists are less useful than dogs.
Take life with a grain of salt, and a icy margarita.
The best things in life are more expensive than you think.

 

 

Rather than "love mankind," I'd rather admire a few good people.
Some flourish when crowded together, others don't.
Garbage In, Compost Out.
It is more about You and Now, rather than Them and Back Then.

 

While gardening the borders between work
     and play become blurred.
When gardening, look up more often.
Just the right words can be worth more
     than a thousand pictures.
Death's door is always unlocked.
A flower needs roots; beauty a society of minds.


A callused palm and dirty fingernails precede a Green Thumb.
A working hypothesis is far better than a belief.
Only two percent of all insects are harmful.
Why are they all in my garden?


Create your own garden, the god's certainly won't.

{{{ Karen Garofalo, Red Bluff, CA, 1999-2016.
We purchased $300 to $400 every year
on trees and shrubs; and we planted them
mostly in January or February. We sold our
house and property to two working women
with four children. I hope these children had
wonderful memoriers of growing up in the
gardens and orchards that Karen and I made
before April of 2017 . }}}

The Spirit of Gardening

That something is eternal is unverifiable.

Most laws of Gardening are merely local ordinances.

Too save some time, don’t let them get a foot in the door.
Some slippery slopes are actually improvements or fun.
Butterflies and bees flapping their wings don’t actually
     create hurricanes, but we are very thankful they facilitate
     the emergence of fruits in the billions.
Without metaphors we can barely speak.


Just because you reject the big request, don’t be
     fooled into accepting the smaller request.
Finding a middle ground for agreement may
     be just half of a solution, and the wrong solution.
Sometimes the wisdom of the crowd is quite unwise and unfair.

Chaos breaks its own rules to allow Order to play.

Failures, disorder and death are the
     Grim Reaper of Entropy at work.
Somehow, someway, everything gets eaten up, someday.
The meaning is lost in the saying - a nature mystic's dilemma.
Vigorous gardening might help more than a psychiatrist's couch.
A gardener is no farmer, he is much too impractical.

No garden lasts for long - neither will you.

Shade, in the summer, is as precious as a glass of water.
A wise gardener knows when to stop.
Gardens are demanding pets.
Unclench your fist to give a hand.
The little choices day after day are the biggest issue.


Gardening is but one battle against Chaos.
When life gives you onions, you ain't making lemonade.
Many friendships are sustained by a mutual
     hatred of another person or group.
Read until you go to seed.
What you see depends on when you look.

Beauty is the Mistress, the gardener her slave.

One's "true self" is changing and elusive.
A little of this and a little of that, and some exceptions -
     these are the facts.
Does a plum tree with no fruit have Buddha Nature? Whack!

 

 

Pulling Onions by Mike Garofalo
     Over 1,000 random quips, one-liners, aphroisms, sayings,
     bullets, onions, and "insights" from an old gardener.

Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations, Part 2

The History of Gardening
A Timeline From Ancient Times to 2000

The Spirit of Gardening

Months and Seasons

The Green Way

Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations, Part 1

 


Sunday, April 19, 2026

Poetry About Time: The Investigations

The Tick-Tock Tractatus

Speaking About Time: The Poetic Investigations

By Michael P. Garofalo

            

                
        August Offerings, Red Bluff CA, 2010, MPG

 

 

Sections

1. Time: time-space, movement, measurement

2. Past: memories, habits, fixed, specific, tradition

3. Present: now, here-now, day, duration

4. Future: maybe, planned, anticipated, uncertain

5. Passing: change, cycles, aging, growth, death

6. Beginning: renewal, starting, enthusiasm

7. Psychology: learning, experience, knowing

8. Middle: in progress, half-way, steady, living

9. Language: poetry, philosophy, ordinary

10. Silence: inexpressive, nonsense, illogical

11. Mystical: numinous, profound, intense, insightful,

12. Beauty: art, crafts, music, reading/writing

13. Social: ethics, morality, economics, manners, value

14. Philosophy: ethics, history, analysis, arguments, logic

15. History: landmark events, books/printing, memory

16. Eternity: forever, infinite, unimaginable, death

 

Preface

Key to Books Cited

Bundled Up Quintains about Time

Additional Notes


7.   Psychology: experience, learning,
      phenomenology, sense of time, personal

 

7.1
Generalities, Questions, Quips

What you see depends on when you look.
What you hear requires you to listen now.

Time is our 6th Sense.

The Specious Present extends consciousness
to include a pinch of the past,
a pinch of the future,
and the fullness of the now.

Give awareness a 5 second window
for processing perceptions.

Afraid to run out of time.
He had time on his hands, then dropped it.

Your brain works on time schedules.

"The quality of attention determines
the nature of the experience."
Joanne Kyger

BU794, GC§14

The Five Senses

 

7.2
Using vs Knowing

We knew that water was essential,
but did not know it was H2O;
We knew the sun was hot,
but had no concept of nuclear.
It works but we don't know how or why.

BU2930

History of Science

 

7.2.1
Unfolding Time

     Implicate orders of a
Underlying Reality
Unfolding Being... and the
     Explicate orders of
ordinary common things.

BU1149, GC§7

David Bohm

Net of Indra

 

7.3.1
End Game

They ran out of time
The game ended on time
They lost this time.
They all got back to the bus in time.
They will do better next time.

BU2835

 

7.3.1.1
The Game of Death

I'm too old
for any real Destiny
except for Death
creeping up to me, tagging Me:
"Your It!"

BU891, GC§36

 

7.3.1.2
Impermanence of Samsara

Samsara is Nirvana?
10,000 Things are Nothing?
Past and future are gone (Empty?).
The Present is gone in a Flash.
What's left? Samsara won't last.

BU918

 

7.3.1.3
Silent Lips

          The sting of Death,
the sharp pains of unseeing,
the final closing of the eyes,
the silent lips of emptiness...
faces lost forever in future times.

BU1246

 

7.3.2
Better Next Month

That such and such is the case
May piss me off for all the day
Why should it be this damn way?

Next month, such and such will not be the case.
I will be very pleased come that day.

BU3431

Quintain Poetry

Time Explained: Experience, Consciousness and Relativity.
By Alan Bennett, 2026.

Reading Wittgenstein 1975-

 

7.3.2.1
Timely Emotions

Emotions cluster around Immediacy.
Distant futures lack emotional density.
We feel very little about 2222 CE.
Few have any passion for far distant unrealities.
We lust after, say, Hot SEX Today! Fuck the Future!

BU3371

Emotions and Time

 

7.3.3
Take it Slow

Travel light
Even yesterday is a heavy backpack.
Travel slowly
Even tomorrow can wait---
Move on, don't hesitate.

BU2890

Time, Change, Freedom:
An Introduction to Metaphysics

By Nathan Oaklander

 

7.3.4
Differences and Distinctions

Things that look the same
are often really different---
in a web of new respects as to usage
in a web of words wedded meanings
in a different place in space/time.

BU2968

Appearances

 

7.3.5
Time Snuck By

The time sauntered by
invisibly, casually, punctually...
I barely noticed.
so busy with pressing deeds---
time flew by in a gentle breeze.

BU3083

"... time is not a linear flow, as we think it is,
into past, present, and future. Time is an
indivisible whole, a great pool in which all
events are eternally embodied and still have
their meaningful flash of super-normal or
extra-sensory perception, and a glimpse of
something that happened long ago in our
linear time."
- Frank Waters, Mountain Dialogues, 1981

 

7.3.5.1
The Time of Inner Mind

Under the Water
of my mind
an unconscious Sea
of Memories
guide me through time

Keep me on a course line
send me some signs
become conscious at times...
freedom may a fiction be
controlled by unknown destinies.

Bring the Unconscious,
Sub-Conscious, ego, and Id,
Collective Unconscious figured in—
Over the waves of Consciousness
the flotsam of Unknowns are adrift.

BU9

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

The Five Senses

 


Saturday, April 18, 2026

Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations

 The Tick-Tock Tractatus

Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations

By Michael P. Garofalo

            

                
        August Offerings, Red Bluff CA, 2010, MPG

 

 

Sections

1. Time: time-space, movement, measurement

2. Past: memories, habits, fixed, specific, tradition

3. Present: now, here-now, day, duration

4. Future: maybe, planned, anticipated, uncertain

5. Passing: change, cycles, aging, growth, death

6. Beginning: renewal, starting, enthusiasm

7. Psychology: learning, experience, knowing

8. Middle: in progress, half-way, steady, living

9. Language: poetry, philosophy, ordinary

10. Silence: inexpressive, nonsense, illogical

11. Mystical: numinous, profound, intense, insightful,

12. Beauty: art, crafts, music, reading/writing

13. Social: ethics, morality, economics, manners, value

14. Philosophy: ethics, history, analysis, arguments, logic

15. History: landmark events, books/printing, memory

16. Eternity: forever, infinite, unimaginable, death

 

Preface

Key to Books Cited

Bundled Up Quintains about Time

Additional Notes


12.6

The Gardening Sutra: Excerpts

Pulling Onions

 

 

A garden recreates itself daily; we seldom step in the
     same garden thrice.
We don't erase the past, we just build more and bigger blackboards.
The present is made from the past.
Time creeps, walks, runs and flies - it is all about moving things.
Chaos breaks its own rules to allow Order to play.

How can gardening be considered a "leisure time" activity?
Always leave extra time for unraveling the hose.
Gardeners turn into the soil their lifetime.
Time may wait for no man, but seems to muddle and poke
     quite slowly for gardeners.
Springtime for birth, Summertime for growth;
     and all Seasons for dying.


Put the right plant in the right place at the right time in
     the right way - and you won't go wrong.
Winter does not turn into Summer; ash does not turn
     into firewood - on the chopping block of time.
A garden flourishes in the mind's time of last season,
     next season, and now.
Gardening requires no commuting time.
In the right place at the right time,
     tomato worms on tomato vines.

Your pocket knife will be its dullest at just the right time.
Gardening is the right sport for a lifetime of pleasures.
Gardening sometimes takes a few hours of a day,
     but adds weeks of pleasure to your life.
The time you have wasted on your garden
     is what makes it priceless.
One purpose of a garden is to stop time in one place.

 

Annuals disappear, shrubs perish, trees die, and
     gardeners are buried; death is the flower of time.
In an instant there is nothing - Time produces Nature.
By the time you peel off five layers of reality,
     it's hard to recall the first.
It's a long time between my garden and the Pacific Ocean.
Time will tell, but we often fail to listen.


The "eternal truths" are sometimes clearly false.
Gardening teaches us to take our time, slow down,
     and wait in peace.
Gardeners learn to live in worm time, bee time, and seed time.
Time will not pass you, but it will follow very close behind you.
Preparation and follow up take up more time than doing the deed.

Springtime flows in our veins.
Silence - never misquoted, sometimes misunderstood,
     often meaningful.
Leave enough time for some pointless behavior
     to reveal your deeper desires.
The seed idea for "God" is springtime.
Things always go downhill, fall apart, wear out...
     the arrow of Time pierces everything.

 

Time prevents too much from happening at once.
A million years and a second have the same
     feeling for the dead gardener.
All metaphors aside - only living beings rise up in the Springtime;
     dead beings stay quite lie down dead.
Any gardener who is not using the scientific method
     will waste time and money.
Take the time to melt into the Details.

Time is rooted in Place.
Most of the time, we just borrow from the past.
Sometimes the present alters our interpretation of the past;
     most often the past surrounds and infects the present.
Time is on your side when you are young.
Leisure can open a window to the breezes of insights,
     and a clear view of the Trees of Time.

We get things done when there is little time left.
Our cash limits and time constraints both prune our gardens.
The second hand of time ticks on---
     measuring our past, time after time.
Beings are Becomings---for the time-being.

Perfection can be the opponent of betterment.
Without vagueness we are bored with literalness.
Borderline cases are where events become really interesting.
I may not be able to precisely define religious nonsense,
     but I know it when I hear it.

A coastline may be impossible to measure,
     but is still beautiful.
You can’t slowly boil the frog unless
     it can’t jump out of the pot.
A “heap” of something desired becomes an issue
     when the price is discussed.
Gratefully, shit happens!
The ten thousand things are more enchanting
     than the Silent One.


Walking needs earth, space, and the walker.
Sometimes, just one 'thing' is critical
     because twenty other 'things' are just so.
Gardening is a kind of deadheading---
     keeping us from going to seed.
Don't interfere, be still, and listen to the litanies of bees.

Tooth and nail, and the stench of a dead animal on the wind.
When life gives you onions, it stinks.
A rake is spaces held together by steel.
In the student's mind there are few possibilities,
     in the teacher's mind there are many;
          but only time to realize very few.

 

Mother Nature is always pregnant.
Time creeps, walks, runs and flies -
     it is all about moving things.
Dogmatists are less useful than dogs.
Take life with a grain of salt, and a icy margarita.
The best things in life are more expensive than you think.

Rather than "love mankind," I'd rather admire a few good people.
Some flourish when crowded together, others don't.
Garbage In, Compost Out.
It is more about You and Now, rather than Them and Back Then.

 

While gardening the borders between work
     and play become blurred.
When gardening, look up more often.
Just the right words can be worth more
     than a thousand pictures.
Death's door is always unlocked.
A flower needs roots; beauty a society of minds.


A callused palm and dirty fingernails precede a Green Thumb.
A working hypothesis is far better than a belief.
Only two percent of all insects are harmful.
Why are they all in my garden?
Create your own garden, the god's certainly won't.
That something is eternal is unverifiable.

Most laws of Gardening are merely local ordinances.

Too save some time, don’t let them get a foot in the door.
Some slippery slopes are actually improvements or fun.
Butterflies and bees flapping their wings don’t actually
     create hurricanes, but we are very thankful they facilitate
     the emergence of fruits in the billions.
Without metaphors we can barely speak.


Just because you reject the big request, don’t be
     fooled into accepting the smaller request.
Finding a middle ground for agreement may
     be just half of a solution, and the wrong solution.
Sometimes the wisdom of the crowd is quite unwise and unfair.

Chaos breaks its own rules to allow Order to play.

Failures, disorder and death are the
     Grim Reaper of Entropy at work.
Somehow, someway, everything gets eaten up, someday.
The meaning is lost in the saying - a nature mystic's dilemma.
Vigorous gardening might help more than a psychiatrist's couch.
A gardener is no farmer, he is much too impractical.

No garden lasts for long - neither will you.

Shade, in the summer, is as precious as a glass of water.
A wise gardener knows when to stop.
Gardens are demanding pets.
Unclench your fist to give a hand.
The little choices day after day are the biggest issue.


Gardening is but one battle against Chaos.
When life gives you onions, you ain't making lemonade.
Many friendships are sustained by a mutual
     hatred of another person or group.
Read until you go to seed.
What you see depends on when you look.

Beauty is the Mistress, the gardener her slave.

One's "true self" is changing and elusive.
A little of this and a little of that, and some exceptions -
     these are the facts.
Does a plum tree with no fruit have Buddha Nature? Whack!

BU3152, BU929, GC#9

Pulling Onions by Mike Garofalo
     Over 1,000 random quips, one-liners, sayings,
     and "insights" from an old gardener.

Process Philosophy

The History of Gardening: A Timeline From Ancient Times to 2000

The Spirit of Gardening

Months and Seasons