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Tuesday, April 21, 2026

The Poetry of William Stafford: Comments

I will be attending a Deep Dive Poetry Workshop on the poet William Stafford (1914-1993) conducted by John Sibley Williams. This Zoom workshop will be held online on April 30, 2026.

I will be attending The Stafford Challenge 2026 Conference in Portland from June 18, 2026 until June 21, 2026. This conference will be held at the Lewis and Clark College campus. The conference has many noted teachers, poets, and scholars in attendance. Our local Vancouver, WA, poet laurate, art’s leader, editor, and teacher, Christopher Luna, will be one of the teachers.

In 2026, I have been reading a lot of the poetry written by William Stafford (1914-1993). He was a professor of English at Lewis and Clark College in Portland, Oregon.  He is one of the best known poets from Oregon.

My preliminary observations about William Stafford’s poetry:

1.   Probably 70% of his poems fit on one page in a printed book. There are typically under 30 lines per page. A number of these poems are more in sonnet length to 20 lines per page. Each poem is titled. He tends to avoid longer lines with lots of syllables. Since I favor brief poems, his style of poetry appeals to me. His style is direct, plain, and succinct!

2.      He uses the Quintain form more often than any other poet I have ever read. I research quintains, pentastichs, tankas, cinquains, quintets, gogyohkas, wakas, commonplaces, and onions.

3.      He enjoyed the outdoors in the Pacific Northwest. He talked about camping, hiking, traveling, people, locales, plants, remote places, and enjoying life outdoors with family and friends. Since I also share many similar interests and write poetry about our Pacific Bio-Region, his concise, plain, and soft spoken words resonated with me.

4.      His anti-war views and socio-political progressive views were appealing. He was a conscientious objector and worked in a federal camp. His philosophy was aligned with my own views on Virtue Ethics.

5.      Many of his poems reflect Native American viewpoints, storytelling, myths, and ways of speaking and writing. I have also studied and appreciate the literature of Native Americans. Staccatos, repeats, chants, two world consciousness, temporal anomalies, bumpy logic, departures into animal/plant minds., mythical nexus, earthiness, insects, etc.

6.      William Stafford’s style of writing benefits from the lack of obscure allusions, name dropping, radical metaphors and convoluted vocabulary, free verse rambling, Paris cliches and Big City shenanigans, and strange surrealistic oulipos Avant-guard sophisticated wordiness.

 These stylistic typographical constraints can challenge any poet to be more concise, to get to the point faster, to use an economy towards words, to be more precise, to be a tighter editor, to be a careful and slashing reviser, to come to a conclusion in a clever terse manner, to make humorous meaningful riddles, to turn over river stones for a closer quick look.

Here are the poetry books by William Stafford that I have read:


Stafford, William
The Way It Is: New and Selected Poems. Graywolf, 1977, 1998, 268 pages. Paperback, VSCPL (My home poetry research library.)


William Stafford. The Darkness Around Us is Deep. 1994, 160 pages. Selected Poems of William Stafford – An Award-Winning Poet's Works Chosen by Bestselling Author Robert Bly. VSCPL.





William Stafford. Allegiances. New Poems by William Stafford. Harper and Row, 1970, 82 pages. FVRL. (Fort Vancouver Regional Libraries)

William Stafford. Even in Small Places. Conference Press, 1996, 120 pages. FVRL.

William Stafford. The World Instead: The Early Poems of William Stafford 1937-1947. Edited with an introduction by Fred Merchant. Graywold Press, 2008, 149 pages. FVRL.

 

I have also read books of poetry by William Stafford’s son,
Kim Stafford, as follows:

Stafford, Kim (Date). As the Sky Begins to Change. By Kim Stafford. Red H2024, 135 pages. FVRL.

Kim Stafford. A Thousand Friends of Rain: New and Selected Poems 1976-1998. By Kim Stafford. Carnegie Mellon Press, 2005, 120 pages. FVRL.

Kim Stafford. Wild Honey, Tough Salt. By Kim Stafford. Red Hen Press, 2019, 111 pages. FVRL.


As for my own poetry research, and poetry writing in April of 2026:

Bundled Up: Quintains, Volume 7

Tick-Tock Tractatus Speaking of Time: The Poetic Investigations, Part 1.

Pulling Onions Speaking of Time, The Poetic Investigations, Part 2

Another Crop of Gardening Thoughts on Time, Part 2.1, TTT 12.6


Lyric Logic: How Modern American Poetry Reasons. By Johanna Winant. Columbia University Press, 2026, 261 pages, index, bibliography, notes. VSCPL. Reading in April, 2026.





Tuesday, March 24, 2026

Quintain Poetry: Quintain Sonnet (555)

 555 quintain + quintain + quintain


15 lines, stanzas with rhyme schemes or free verse

Mike Garofalo Quintain Sonnet Examples 555
Examples: # 92, 932, 933, 939, 1513, 1931, 2006, 2049, 2077, 2099,
# 2131, 2175, 2243, 2254, 2576, 2853, 2925


John Ashbury, A Picture of J. A. in a Prospect of Flowers

Robert Bly:
The Poem
The Chinese Peaks
The Rainy September

Hilda Doolittle (H.D.):
Time has an end you say

William Everson, Jacob and the Angel


Mike Garofalo (555):
Alternatives of Two #2049
Best Way Forward # 2214
The Bloodless Sea #92
The Bottom Line #2175
Criteria for Action #2735
The Day My Religion Started to Die 
#2340
Double Visions #933
The Event: Number 16; She Was Fire #2788
A False Call to Men 
# 2506
Feathers in the Weeds 
#2243
Flotsams of Unknowns 
#2303
The Hanford Radioactive Blues # 2254
Here & Now @ 
#2374
Packed Into Anxiety 
#1968
Playing with the Table Box 
#2035
The Pleasures of Masochistic Conundrums 
#932
Quintains At a Minimum #2576
Running Out of Time 
#1513
Sand in my Face #2926
So What If? 
#1964
A Titled Quintain is a Sextet #2077
Bundled Up: Quintain Sonnets: Volume 5
We Spoke Softly 
# 2589
The West Edge Tour 
# 2925
Will Cherished Ideals Survive 
#2229

 

Philip Larkin:
Compline
Hard Lines
The Returning I
Song With a Spoken Refrain
Success Story
Young Woman's Blues

D. H. Lawrence:
Come Spring, Come Sorrow #2853
Turned Down # 2973

Audre Lorde, Love Poem

Marianne Moore, Feed Me, Also, River God

Howard Nemerov:
Date with the Rabbi
First Snow
To the Mannequins
The Vacuum

The Wheel King #2541

Octavio Paz:
Walking Through the Light #2099

Arthur RimbaudThe Poor Man Dreams #2209

Christina Rosetti, By the Sea

 

William Stafford:
Entering History
Fixers
For a Lost Child
Freedom
The Gift
Haycutters
Ice Fishing
Jeremiah at Miminagish
A Life, a Ritual
A Memorial to My Mother
Midwest
My Mother Was a Soldier
No Praise, No Blame
Over the North Jetty
Right to Die

Security
Stereopticon
Vocation
The Wanderer Awaiting Preferment
Watching the Jet Planes Dive
Whispered in Winter
Witness

Diane Wakoski, Belly Dancer

W. B. Yeats:
The Mother of God
Remorse for Intemperate Speech #2710
The Road at My Door
The Rose of the World
The Stare's Nest in My Window

 

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

Bundled Up: 3,500+ Quintains
By Michael P. Garofalo

 

Sunday, June 22, 2025

Recent Quintain Poems by Mike Garofalo

Quintain Poems by Mike Garofalo

Quintain Poetry Research

Pentastich Poetry

25 Steps and Beyond
The Collected Works of Mike Garofalo

 

740.

Reading Ted Berrigan's Sonnets
from 1964— a brainy Bore.
Muddled random tiny thoughts
absent of meaningfulness
scattered around on clumsy round floors.

Ideas popping like green popcorn
on the twisted streets of hip New York
pointless lines on pills of speed
running round dead orange olive trees
bizarre concoctions of decoying imagery.

In some ways silly FUN, like listening
to the confused chatter of a drugged insane
Prophet of impossible dry rain
mumbling inanities before the Cisco Kid.
Berrigan clearly not a clear Billy Collins.

 

741.

Sleepless in Sunset Suburbs

my mind working overtime:
a speeding bike without brakes
a rolling rock tumbling down
a super-alert consciousness drained
a can't-quit-motor speeding on

 

742.

Iran Bombed into Itself

Listening to the News
about the war in Iran:
Israel demolished the
Shi'a Regime's military, the
USA bombed it's nuclear sites.

I'm not upset to see Iranian
proxies and the Iranian Shi'a
Regime dismantled. Proxy
terrorists like Hamas, Hezbollah,
Levant, Baathists, [Sunni-Isis-Al-Qaeda]

Have openly stated their aims
to terrorize and destroy
Israel, the USA, and other Nations.
Good Riddance!
Likewise, our own Christian Nationalists

Seek to Rule us Secular Woke Folks.
But we don't need or want
More religious zealots In Charge;
Favoring a separation of Church and State,
Religions are often a violent disgrace.


700.

Common Sense
often not so common
and makes no sense—
the least common denominator
of stupidity simplified

    Used to justify
magically the dumbest
meanest cruelest acts
useless false opinions
selfish stupidity and lies

    Worshiped by self-righteous
solipsists bereft of any sense
of a real world bigger than 'I'.
Full of 'truths' empty of facts,
    willing to Kill to keep
their Fictions alive.

 

Monday, March 27, 2023

Koan Database Project

Subject and Title Indexes
Koan Database Project

To Brief Spiritual Lessons, Parables,
Koan Cases, Stories, Definitions, Tales,
Questions, Dialogues, Lectures, Statements

Indexing by Michael P. Garofalo


Sparks: Brief Spiritual Stories, Dialogues, and Encounters

Matches to Start the Kindling of Insight
May the Light from Your Inner Fireplace Help All Beings
Zen Buddhist Koan Collections
Catching Phrases, Inspiring Verses, Hard Questions
Bibliography, Indexing, Quotations, Notes, Resources
Research by Michael P. Garofalo


Gateless Gate or Gateless Barrier Koan Collection (GB)
48 Cases of Brief Koans, Stories, Spiritual Encounters, Wisdom Tales, Sermons, Dialogues
Compiled around 1250 CE
Indexed by Michael P. Garofalo. First Draft on March 25, 2023.
Source for Case Titles: The Gateless Gate, Translated by Koun Yamada Roshi, 2004.

Alphabetical List of the Gateless Barrier (GB) Koan Collection Cases. PDF, 2 pages.

List of Cases by Case Numbers in the Gateless Barrier Koan Collection. PDF, 2 pages.

Subject Index to Cases in the Gateless Barrier (GB) Koan Collection. PDF, 9 pages.

PDF files are searchable. Use the keyboard strokes: Ctrl + F This will open the Search or Find box.

[I just started using Microsoft Access again on 3/23/2023. Just learning this database software by reading books and by creating this Koan Database Project in 2023. I am focused on improving my indexing skills, adding content, and improving my database Report creation skills.]

Reminder: When you find a hypertext document or file (PDF, JPG, .doc, GIF) on the Internet that seems valuable to you, then download the hypertext document or file to your computer's hard disk drive or on your external hard disk drive. Why? That hypertext document or file might be gone tomorrow!

 

The Blue Cliff Record Koan Collection (BCR)
100 Cases of Brief Koans, Stories, Spiritual Encounters, Wisdom Tales, Sermons, Dialogues
Compiled around 1125 CE
Indexed by Michael P. Garofalo. First Draft on March 25, 2023.
Source for Case Titles: The Blue Cliff Record, Translated by Thomas Cleary and J. C. Cleary, 1977.

Alphabetical List of the Blue Cliff Record (BCR) Koan Collection Cases. PDF, 4 pages.

List of Cases by Case Numbers in the Blue Cliff Record (BCR) Koan Collection. PDF, 4 pages.

Subject Index to Cases in the Blue Cliff Record (BCR) Koan Collection. PDF, 21 pages.

 

Daodejing by Laozi, Te Ching by Lao Tzu (DDJ)
Daodejing by Laozi.
81 Verses, Cases, Chapters. Our popular version compiled around 220 CE.
Indexed by Michael P. Garofalo. Third Draft in June 2014.

A typical webpage created by Michael P. Garofalo for each one of the 81 brief Chapters (Verses, Cases, Sections) of the Daodejing includes 25 different English language translations or interpolations for that Chapter, 5 Spanish language translations for that Chapter, the Chinese characters for that Chapter, the Wade-Giles and Hanyu Pinyin transliterations (Romanization) of the Mandarin Chinese words for that Chapter, and 2 German and 1 French translation of that Chapter.  Each webpage for each one of the 81 Chapters of the Daodejing includes extensive indexing by key words, phrases, and terms for that Chapter in English, Spanish, and the Wade-Giles Romanization.  Each webpage on a Chapter of the Daodejing includes recommended reading in books and websites, a detailed bibliography, some commentary, research leads, translation sources, a Google Translate drop down menu, and other resources for that Daodejing Chapter.

Chapter and Thematic Index (Concordance) to the Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu


English Language Daodejing Translators' Source Index


Spanish Language Daodejing Translators' Source Index


Ripening Peaches: Taoist Studies and Practices


Taoism: A Selected Reading List




Daodejing by Laozi (DDJ)
81 Verses, Cases, Chapters, Sections. Our popular version compiled around 220 CE.
Indexed by Michael P. Garofalo. First Draft in June of 2023.
Source for Case/Verse/Chapter Titles: Tao Te Ching translation by Lin Yutang in 1955.
For the Koan Database, I limited search terms/Tags to 3 entries.
My more extensive online searchable Concordance for the Tao Te Ching is described above.

List of Cases by Case Numbers in the Daodejing (DDJ). PDF, 3 pages.

Alphabetical List of the Cases in the Tao Te Ching (DDJ). PDF, 3 pages.

Subject Index to Cases in the Tao Te Ching (DDJ) PDF, 15 pages.

 

The Book of Serenity (BOS) Book of Equanimity
100 Cases of Brief Koans, Stories, Spiritual Encounters, Wisdom Tales, Sermons, Dialogues
Compiled and published around 1224 CE.
Indexed by Michael P. Garofalo. First Draft on June 1, 2023.
Source for Case Titles: The Book of SerenityOne Hundred Zen Dialogues. Translated with commentary by Thomas Cleary, 2005.

Alphabetical List of the Book of Serenity (BOS) Koan Collection Cases. PDF, 4 pages.

List of Cases by Case Numbers in the Book of Serenity (BOS) Koan Collection. PDF, 4 pages.

Subject Index to Cases in the Book of Serenity (BOS) Koan Collection. PDF, 21 pages.

 

 

Master Subject Index
Koan Database Project
Indexing by Michael P. Garofalo
First Draft, April 1, 2023
This subject index includes Cases from the:
Blue Cliff Record (BCR), 100 Cases
Gateless Barrier (GB), 48 Cases
Book of Serenity (BOS), 25 Cases
Daodejing (DDJ), 20 Cases
Fireplace Records (TFR), 12 Cases
PDF files are searchable. Use the keyboard strokes: Ctrl + F This will open the Search or Find box.

Master Subject Index of the Koan Database Project. PDF, 42 pages.

PDF files are searchable. Use the keyboard strokes: Ctrl + F This will open the Search or Find box.

 

What's Coming in 2023 and 2024:

Michael Garofalo's Brief Spiritual Lessons Indexing Project

Indexing Brief Spiritual Lessons, Stories, Koans, Encounters, Wisdom Tales, Lectures,
Sermons, Lore, Dialogues, Inspirational Verse, History, Scriptures, Advice, Poetry,
Buddhist and Taoist Literature, Collected Lessons, and Lore

Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu. Daodejing by Laozi. 81 Cases, Verses, Chapters. Our version compiled around 220 CE.

Book of Serenity (BOS) 100 Koan Collection; Compiled around 1224 CE.

Master Subject Index of the Koan Database Project

Dogen Koan Collection (Shinji Mana Shobogenzo) (SMS) 301 Koan Collection; Compiled around 1220 CE.

Transmission of Light. 53 Biographies, compiled by Keizan around 1310 CE.

Open a Mountain. 60 Koan Collection, compiled by Steven Heine, 2001.

Entangling Vines. 272 Koans; compiled and printed in Japan in 1658.

Modern (MOD) Modern (1800-1999) Contemporary Brief Spiritual Verses, Key Leaders, Information

The Record of Linji. 50 Koan Collection; translation and commentary by Ruth Fuller Sasaki, 2009. Compiled around 850 CE.

Books I Use in My Research and Study of Koan Collections

Sparks: Brief Spiritual Stories, Dialogues, and Encounters
Matches to Start the Kindling of Insight
May the Light from Your Inner Fireplace Help All Beings
Zen Buddhist Koan Collections
Catching Phrases, Inspiring Verses, Hard Questions
Bibliography, Indexing, Quotations, Notes, Resources
Research by Michael P. Garofalo

The Fireplace Records
By Michael P. Garofalo


 

 


Monday, June 06, 2022

Wednesday, June 01, 2022

Seaside Snippets: Short Poems by Michael P. Garofalo

 

Uncle Mike's Seaside Snippets


Short Poems by Michael P. Garofalo

Haiku, Brief Free Verse, Photos, Couplets, Waka
Tersets, Concrete Poems, Quartets, Senryu

 

 

blooms of Spring
flanked by evergreens—
   sunshine on stones

 

Do the pines daydream?
  feeding logs
  into the flames

 

   The Surf Swallowed
   All in its Way—
Night and Day!

 

the sea
smashed on the shore—
drifting thoughts

 

 

 

 

grains of sand
on Grayland's strand—
   needles on pines

 

     cells in my hand
  moving the sand—
raindrops washing the sea

 

rocks of the jetty
slick and cold—
black rockfish
gather below

 

pumps watering
red cranberry fields—
wind turbines
often spinning

 

Splitting dry kindling,
damp November day—
wind chimes       tinkling

 

  birds gather on the mud—
low tide
at noon

 

broken razor clam shells
scattered around—
   drunken men laughing

 

 

 

 

moonrise—
the dark night of a soul
       lifts

 

walking over
fallen leaves—
    a moonlit path

 

dawn—
   every leaf drips
   backlit by fog

 

 

You shared the spark,
You fanned the flame,
You fed the fires,
You passed the Names.
For all those known and
For all those unnamed,
We raise this toast
With thanks this day.

 

wild animals are wily—
   staying alive
   rules our lives

 

      dry sand
      wet sand—
low tide at noon

 

 

 

 

Foggy all morning—
a raven breakfasts
      on red roadkill

 

Gleaming gas pumps
In the fluorescent night,
Slaves of the Almighty Dollar,
Pouring hot octanes
Into the bellies of Chevies.

Ding! Ding! Gallons go down.
Wallets open and fold.
Acid fogs melt steel belted moons.

Headlights come and go, flashing
By the drying Lakes of Petro.

A Dead End ahead, everywhere,
For us, for OPEC, for Fords.

 

 

jet lights high in the sky—
the moon over
      black soft surf

 

Cut fir logs
stacked two stories high—
    screeching mill saws....

 

Stoned silly
on strong sativa—
  Doors of Deceptions

 

If you understand, things are changing;
If you don't understand, things are changing.

 

Buzzards circling
higher and higher—
     bright sky.

 

 driftwood floats by
    at high tide—
boats hide

 

 

 

Salmon drying
in the smoker—
caviar on a cracker.

 

Swordfish
sizzles fast on the grill—
lemon drops.

 

      oyster shooters
      tingle my tongue—
cannabis buzzes her brain

 

"Dirty old man"
    says she, with a wry frown;
slipping her panties down.

our lips smack
     separating
our fantasies

secent of her flowers
     woozy
kissing her knee

ruckus on
damp sheets all askew—
     panting face to face

trembling together
     we explode!!
groaning ....

 

 

 

 

        Floating upstream past Time
      Ticking counter clockwise,
    Repeating carnal fantasies—
  Rumbling surf got louder,
I fell asleep.

 

 

 

 

     graveyard gate
   closed—
dense fog

 

 

Live long enough,
and the losses pile up,
Till you're tossed away
like an old cracked cup,
All stained and worm,
dulled by time,
Useless, leaking,
not worth a dime.

Egoless, your flesh falls away,
a skeleton
Lost in Nirvana; lights out,
all done.

Then, the Skeleton Woman
drinks your dry tears,
Drums your still heart,
and sings away fears,
Slips under the quilts
and gives Love a Whirl;
Spinning, twirling,
your reborn as a Girl.

Forget yourself,
crack the cup on the floor,
Speak in a new voice,
the past is no more.

 

 

somehow, someway
everyone
gets eaten up someday

 

    running out of time
for catching up
    with the future
now

 

        my mind grinds
        my times
into memories

 

Shadows from a slice of moonshine
Ripple down the sagging grape vines
Unburdened of their sweet red sex,
Withered, distorted, grotesquely bent.
    Yet they live on, now as I:
Mouthfuls of dried raisins turned to chyme,
    Reborn as muscles, eyes, and Mind.

 

To dance at the still point
Of the Time beyond time,
Beyond pasts, within futures,
this Moment
Now and forever, beyond minds.

 

 

 

 

Poetry by Michael P. Garofalo

Cuttings: Haiku and Short Poems

Pulling Onions: Over 1,000 One-Liners

Cloud Hands Blog

Green Way Research Subject Index

Facebook

Four Days in Grayland

More Slices of the Sea

Reflections of Beachcombers

 

 

 

 

 

Michael Peter Garofalo in the Spring of 2020
Home, Vancouver, Washington, USA


All text, photos, graphics, and webpage coding by Mike Garofalo
First posted online on June 1, 2022.
Last updated on June 2, 2022.

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Coastal Northwest Oregon, USA
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