Showing posts with label Vancouver - Poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Vancouver - Poetry. Show all posts

Wednesday, January 21, 2026

Quintain Poetry: Two Older Rhyme Schemes

Here are a two rhyme schemes for those writing quintain poems.

I do research into Quintain Poetry.


Spanish Quintain (Quintilla)

ABBAA

ABBAA Spanish Q #862, 1465, 1485, 1575, # 1666, 1800, 2211

Spanish Quintain Rhyme Scheme Prosody

A. Two aphorisms and bourbon on the rocks.
B. Two witticisms and whipped cream on the pie.
B. Two comparisons that catch the keen eye.
A. Two images that knock off your socks.
A. Two contrasts that leave some shocked.
- Mike Garofalo, # 1465

There are other rules and options for the
Quintilla form in the Spanish language.


English Quintain

ABABB

Examples:

ABABB English Q #726, 1197, 1498

English Quintain Rhyme Scheme Prosody

A. Colored flashes in the window pane
B. Christmas lights glowing red and green.
A. The homeless man has no name,
B. Sits in cold dark tent unseen,
B. Wearing a sock cap of red and green.
- Mike Garofalo, # 726 

English Quintain: "The English quintain follows a rhyme scheme of ABABB, in which the final two lines form a rhyming couplet. Though an English quintain requires an ABABB rhyming pattern, there is no established foot or measure." Example:

"In the golden lightning
Of the sunken sun,
O'er which clouds are bright'ning,
Thou dost float and run;
Like an unbodied joy whose race is just begun."
- Percy Bysshe Shelley

There are other rules and options for the
English Quintain form in the English language.



Bundled Up - Quintains: Volume 1, 1 - 1,000

Bundled Up - Quintains: Volume 2, 1,000 - 1,500

Bundled Up - Quintains: Volume 3, 1,500 - 2,000

Bundled Up - Quintains: Volume 4, 2,000 - 2,500

Bundled Up - Quintains: Volume 5, 2,500 - 3,000

 

Poetry by Michael P. Garofalo

Quintain Poetry Research

Quintain Poetry Rhyme Schemes

Quintain Sonnet Forms





Sunday, October 12, 2025

One Picture of Me

 

One Picture of Me

By Mike Garofalo



When Laurence asked for poems on the theme of "Self-Portrait" I though of a long philosophical poem I wrote about the interrelated subjects of Picturing and Describing. 

One set of examples I used in that long poem was the human skull. I spoke of memories of Halloween in East Los Angeles, where Mexican Skulls, calaveras, filled displays on El Dia De La Muerte. Meaningful from artistic and religious perspectives.

The brief poem I'm sharing today is a excerpt about my own skull as Pictured by medical imaging, and described by me and interpreted by the oral surgeon.


"This bony skull of mine
electrified
pictured onscreen for me.
     Doctor recommends
     some oral surgery.

The brain disappeared,
an empty space
sliced from
X Ray images retraced.
Eyeless in inner space.

Monkey nose holes,
bony eye glasses,
teeth glowing in the dark.
     Inner spaces never seen
     underneath my very being.

Skinless, noseless, earless,
a shape, a form—
     the images informed.
Stripping away the unneeded,
revealing my inner core."


So, as we all know, a single picture or image can cause a flow of ideas, interpretations, and feelings in our minds.

Or, just two words can please, excite or inflame our minds. Our lover's name can explode our feelings.

But, just two other words can frighten our moral being.

For example, 

Donald Trump ...
[pause, raise your elbow]

Kick Him Out. 

See you on the street next Saturday.


The above "brief poem" will be printed in
The SkullCrushing Hummingbird
Zine #7
, in Portland, Oregon,
on 10/12/2025.


Commentary: Off the Cuff


So, considering, have you ever seen
a picture or a video or a drawing
of a Skull Crushing Hummingbird,
crushing an insect's Skull
with its tiny beak or flashing wings?

No, you have not,
and that is just one reason why,
you don't believe
that Skull Crushing Hummingbirds
are really alive.

However,
Words, context, technical knowledge,
and intent claim meaningfulness,
even truth,
in addition to any pictures viewed.
The surgeon and I see differently.

Sometimes, though, we reader's prefer
fantasies and fictional
Skull Crushing Hummingbirds
to any ho-hum boring beings-
a moniker for fun memories.


***********************


Pictures mirroring things
displaying aspects of reality
uncovering hidden realms of being
pointing to more clear correspondence.
Show me a good picture - Please!

We drew pictures in caves
Heroes pictured in statues
Books illustrated pictured facts
Drones picture our towns from above
Hubble sends us clear pictures of Space

Our brains are
Picture processing ... Machines-
and you can picture mindfulness
you can picture your intent verbally...
picturing is a form of meaningfulness.

Science and technology have
invented new ways of picturing
so we can see into Reality
and open our ordinary eyes
to new ways of seeing.

Picturing - Defining
Planning - Imagining
Painting - Photography
Reflecting - Mimicking
Do I see what I mean?

Wittgenstein in the Tractatus of 1921
Used Pictures and Picturing as the
criterion of meaningfulness and truth.
Wittgenstein in the Investigations of 1953
changed to talking about our talking
about, in ordinary words, aspects of Picturing.

The best pictures, the best descriptions,
how we talk in everyday ways,
point to correspondence, mirroring,
a theory of epistemology.
Richard Rorty disagreed.


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Bundled Up, Volume 1
Quintains, Pentastichs, Tankas

Gushen Grove Sonnets

Highway 101 and 1: A Docu-Poem
California, Oregon, Washington

25 Steps and Beyond
The Poetry by Mike Garofalo


Sunday, July 27, 2025

Poetry from Vancouver, Washington State

 

25 Steps and Beyond:
The Collected Works

By Mike Garofalo

Poetry, Anthologies, Indexes
Studies, Blog, Guides, Travel
Ethics, Art, Koans, Spirituality

 

US Highway 101 and Hwy 1

US Highway 99 and Interstate 5

Quintains, Pentastich and Tanka Poems

Cuttings: Haiku, Senryu, Brief Verses

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

Cantos of the Hands

Reviews of My Webpages

Stepping Over Epiphanies

Daodejing: Indexes, Concordance, Anthology

A Fork in the Crypto Road

727 Riddles, Jokes, Brain Teasers

The Spirit of Gardening

Docu-Poem

Poetry in My Cloud Hands Blog

Haiku - North Sacramento Valley

Flowers in the Sky

Above the Fog

Biography: Mike Garofalo

At the Edges of the West, Volume 1

At the Edges of the West, Volume 2

Exhibits of TextArt

The Wreck Ahead Comes Into View

Cloud Hands Blog

How to Live a Good Life

Stuck in Some Concrete Poetry

The Raven Broke Open the Magical Clam

Pulling Onions: 1,000 One Liners

Four Days at Grayland Beach

Meetings with Master Chang San-Feng

25 Steps and Beyond Anthology

Subject Index to 1,975 Zen Koans (PDF)

Biography: Mike Garofalo

One Short of a Baker's Dozen

More Poetry by Mike Garofalo

Poetry Research

Interstate 5 and Hwy 99

Five Senses

Reviews of Poetry Books

Memories of Pacific Coast Places

One Old Daoist Druid's Final Journey

Uncle Mike's Cellphone Poetry Series

Fireplace Records Koan Collection

Brief Poems and Haiku

Epigrams, Quips, Sayings: 1,000 One Liners

Tao Te Ching: Concordance, Anthology

Zen Buddhist Koans: Research, Indexes

Blooming Onions Pulled from the Mind-Ground

Zen Poetry

Virtues and the Good Life

Villanelle Form Poems

Sonnet Form Studies

Quintain Form Studies

Zen Koans: Subject Index

Biography: Mike Garofalo

Monthly Observations and Poetry

Green Way Research Index

Body-Mind-Somatics Arts

Couplets

Tai Chi Chuan and Qigong

Pentastich and Quintains

Neo-Pagan Spirituality Studies

Tanka and Quintain Poetry

Travel Poetry: CA, OR, WA, BC

Flowers

Meditations of a Gardener

Free Verse Poetry

Cuttings: Haiku and Tercets (1998-2016)

Transitions: Haiku and Tercets (2017-2025)

A Gift of Dried Garlic Flowers

Dialogues in the Renga Style

Fourfold Ways: Quatrains

Bog Posts - Poetry

Two Levels: Haibun Poetry

Tercets, Haiku, Epigrams

Doggerel Verses

Prose Poems

Works in Progress Notebook

Poetry for the Four Seasons

Texts Press Publications

Tai Chi Chuan & Qigong

Concordance for the Tao Te Ching

The Bottom Line

John Ashbery Studies

Billy Collins Studies

Slouching Into Incoherence

Northwest Native American Lore, Myths

Reviews, Kudos, Feedback, Praise, Cited

My Poetry Studies in 2025

Garofalo Sonnet Form

Vancouver WA Poetry

 

the scissors of my decisions

more to come ...

 

 

Mike Garofalo lives in Vancouver,
Orchards & Five Corners Neighborhoods,
Northeast Clark County, Washington State.

He is available for public readings
in Vancouver or Portland.

He writes, reads and studies Poetry.
His hobbies include: gardening,
writing, walking adventures,
yurt camping, reading, blogging,
Taijiquan, exploring the Northwest,
research studies, local trips,
and family activities.

He has been web publishing since
1998 at Green Way Research.

Mike is 80 years of age.
He has a calm, pleasant, and
friendly speaking voice.
He is a big tall elderly gent.

Best to send him email.

 

Thursday, May 08, 2025

Ghost Town Open Mic Poetry Reading in Vancouver WA






Featuring Janis Harrington and Victor Griggs. Many other local authors read their poems. The Open Mic session went from 7 pm to 10 pm. A diverse crowd of listeners and readers.
Full Information at Printed Matter, April 2025

I thoroughly enjoyed the last three Open Mic events in our Vancouver downtown. Listening to live readings and meeting poets has greatly expanded my understanding in many positive ways. I could hardly sleep last night after these profound experiences. Some of the readings brought tears to my eyes.

Reading out load to an audience is a Performance Art, an Acting Art! I need to improve my skills in this area.

I purchased a book by Janis Harrington. I was able to talk with her before the event began. A classy lady with a sharp mind! Her poem about being a girl in a Catholic School brought back many memories of mind; because, I attended Catholic School classrooms in grades 1st to 12th.

Friday, May 02, 2025

Birdhous Books Poetry Reading

On the First Friday of each month, Birdhouse Books in downtown Vancouver, Washington State, hosts an open mic poetry reading as well as featuring particular poets. The poetry session begins at 6:45 pm.

Full Information at Printed Matter March 2025

This bookstore will be closing, and hopefully moving, in the next couple of months. It is located down some steep steps below a coffee shop.

Tonight, the featured reader was Morgan Paige. She was a skilled performer, great voice, engaging poems. She read mostly from her book "Blue Morpho." I was very impressed by her outstanding performance.

Birdhouse Books, 1001 Main St., Vancouver, corner of Evergreen, will host First Friday Poetry Night with Morgan Paige from 7 to 8:30 p.m. May 2, in conjunction with downtown Vancouver’s First Friday Art Walk. Paige is a poet, visual artist, entrepreneur and co-host of Ghost Town Poetry Open Mic Night at Art at the Cave Gallery. Her book of memoir poetry, “Blue Morpho,” details her journey to Costa Rica in 2018.


25 Steps and Beyond:
The Collected Works of Mike Garofalo

Saturday, April 26, 2025

Open Mic Poetry Reading in Vancouver WA

 

An Open Mic Poetry Reading was held from 3-5 pm at the downtown central library of the Fort Vancouver Regional Library System. We met in the spacious and attractive Columbia Room in the library.

Around 25 people attended this poetry reading. Library staff welcomed the attendees and briefly covered the ground rules for appropriate readings in a public libary setting. Refreshments were provided.

The current poet-laureate for Clark County, Susan Dingle, shared some of her poems from her Master’s Thesis. She gave the name of each person before they read their poems. I did not remember the names of so many readers.

Three people shared haiku or short poems. Most read longer poems from their cell phones. One man had memorized his poem, and beautifully acted it out for us. Women and men shared their compositions.

This was the first time I had ever read one of my poems to an audience. But, I did not mention this to the audience. I was calm and confident. I read my poem titled: A Fork in the Crypto Road.

Many poems were of a confessional nature about the poet’s addictions, mental illness, losses, sadness, Striking images and metaphors were prevalent. Most were free verse compositions. A couple of poems were accounts of travel experiences and thoughts

I enjoyed myself. I sat next to a young college student, Kameron, a history major at WSU Vancouver, and we chatted a good deal. Her father had just retired and moved to Kalama WA for fishing. Her poem was about her dad.

I met Jacob Seltzer, a Master Level haiku and tanka poet. I also met my new online Zoom poetry teacher, Christopher Luna. I spoke briefly with Sarah Hooker, a Haiku poet.


At the Edges of the West
Highway 101 and 1

25 Steps and Beyond: The Collected Works
By Mike Garofalo

Sunday, April 20, 2025

Message from the Vessel in a Dream: A Review

Message from the Vessel in a Dream. By Christopher Luna. First Flowstone Press Edition, 2018, 130 pages. Printed Matter Vancouver VSCL.

Amazon Review by Mike Garofalo:

This is a fine collection of poems authored by Christopher Luna. His poems are mostly in free verse, hip, Beat style, and contemporary. His justified anger about contemporary injustices and oppression are told in his verses. Mr. Luna’s command of creative Beat Style poetic techniques is impressive. He uses prose narratives, quotations, asides, conversational block poems, italic formatted comments on poets and poetry, references to books and articles, abstract and philosophical ruminations at times, and he provides fresh insights. Most of his carefully crafted poems fit on one page. He is frank and open about sexuality, friendships, drugs, parties, contemporary issues, and alternative lifestyles. His sophisticated bluntness and direct manner are invigorating. His poems are mostly about people, not places or nature. I found his Collage Poems technique (Fecund Labyrinth, pp.61-111) very interesting; and his interest in the Investigative Poetry techniques from Ed Sanders to be stimulating.

I find his poetic messages robust, earthy, life loving, and free, for example: “when awake/ each moment/ is a glorious/ potentially transformative/ high energy, construct/that opens slowly, deliberately/ like the lotus petals/ of a woman’s vulva/ as we stand in awe/ scribbling furiously/ hoping to get it all down/ needing to get it right, dammit.” p.37

I have also purchased two of his edited anthologies: Ghost Town Poetry, Open Mic: Volumes 2 and 3; reviewed elsewhere. Also, Good Reads!

I prefer his other good collage art works rather than the astronaut one used on the cover of this engaging book. But, never judge a book by its cover.

The book provides a detailed autobiography and information about other "Rebel Angel" post-modern poets who have influenced him: Allen Ginsberg, Niki Giovanni, Amiri Baraka, Anne Waldman, Ed Sanders, and Diane di Prima." Mr. Luna is an active leader of poetry Open Mic sessions, a literary coach, an editor, a collage artist, film critic, researcher, jazz musician, and social activist in the City of Vancouver, Washington State. He is an “Outsider,” with an MFA from the Jack Kerouac School of Disembodied Poetics from Naropa University in 1999. He was the Poet Laureate in Vancouver from 2013-2017.

A book deep enough for rereading!


Ghost Town Poetry: Cover to Cover Books, 2004-2010: An Anthology of Poems from the Ghost Town Open Mic Series. Edited by Christopher J. Juna and Toni Partington. 2011, 134 pages. VSCL.

Ghost Town Poetry: Volume Two, 2004-2014. Edited by Christopher Luna and Toni Partington. Cover to Cover Books, Printed Matter Vancouver, WA, 2014, 98 pages. FVRL.

Ghost Town Poetry Open Mic: Volume Three, 2004-2024. Edited by Christopher Luna, Toni Lumbrazo Luna, and Morgan Paige. Printed Matter, Vancouver WA, 2024. 149 pages. Purchased at Birdhouse Books in Vancouver, WA. VSCL. 

Amazon Review by Mike Garofalo:

I was first made aware of this interesting collection when I read a copy of the book borrowed from the Fort Vancouver Regional Library. I found the books artwork, the good poems, and the collage by Christopher Luna to be appealing.

The introduction by Mr. Luna was highly informative and would be useful for anyone trying to establish a local Open Mic poetry reading series in a community. Clark County has over a half million residents, so the nearby fan base of poetry lovers is considerable in the Vancouver, Washington State area where I live. Many interesting people shared their experience, reflections, and poetic compositions.

The poems are challenging, contemporary, hip, inclusive, liberal, woke, and lively. Hearing them read by the authors to the Vancouver Open Mic crowd must have been delightful and thought-provoking.

Although I have lived in Vancouver since 2017, I have never attended an Open Mic session and have not yet met Mr. Luna. I intend to attend my first Open Mic session in Vancouver in April of 2025.

This anthology was edited by Christopher Luna and Toni Partington in 2014.

After reading this book, I purchased “message from the vessel in a dream” authored by Mr. Luna. A very worthwhile purchase for me; reviewed elsewhere. Also, at the local Birdhouse Books bookstore, I purchased a new copy of “Ghost Town Poetry Open Mic: Volume Three, 2004-2024, edited by Chris Luna, Toni Lumbrazo Luna, and Morgan Paige, $20.00.

At 98 pages, this is the smallest chapbook of the three Open Mic anthologies. A very good bargain for a paperback on Amazon.

Book Reviews by Mike Garofalo